Reviews for Undisclosed desire
Mr. Skellington chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
I liked it enough to ignore the use of ' instead of " which is something that usually really really pisses me off. Not enough good Wiffy to be picky though.
La Kill chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Augh! Leaving it so open, how could you! I need more!
satanslut chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
This was cute. A fun, AU sort of tale that was quite pleasant. Glad I ventured over to give your work a look-see.
Marie168 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
How very interesting. I don't think that could ever happen, however, lol
Anon chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
I really really really like the ending. Perfect!
Howard Russell chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Delightfully smutty! Glad they're getting acceptance from everyone. Joyce should be okay with it too.

Thanks for writing this.
snixxx69 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
That was awesome! i really like it!You should definietly write more.
young wiccan chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Hehe, I can't wait to see what Willow thinks of the fact it was Buffy who gave her the lapdance
Lola chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Great job! Oh my god I laughed so much at Giles :)
Wispr chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Now that was a bloody cute story and great work with the little details you added to flesh out the scenes.

The ending was priceless!

caradens chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
excellent story
Barnabas C chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Very cute. Great final scene, and no matter how many times it happens, I'll never get tired of Dawn walking in on them. Always funny.

On a constructive note, the 1- and 2-sentence paragraphs are still pretty jarring, and you really need to flip-flop your use of ' and ". If you already have a beta-reader, maybe it would be a good idea to find a second one who specializes in punctuation.