|Reviews for What do you mean, Dragon Rider?|
| adorestories chapter 6 . 7/20/2013
Last chapter is a bit unrealistic... 1: why doesn't arya just heal him? 2: arya would win a duel between the two (or at least put up a long fight)
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/29/2012
i ...love you!
| Hidden Brisingr chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Chapter 1 Carnavall does not know that you can share memoies
| A Changing Persona chapter 6 . 6/27/2011
Hmmm...these little one-shots show promise.
| EmmaLynn Kay chapter 5 . 10/3/2010
I like. This one is my fav.
| StardustRose11 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
please update soon? i love this story!
| SaguaroCactus chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Well, it was good. I just had one problem. Your spacing is messed up. Have you seen where the new parts start?
| P chapter 6 . 7/7/2010
I love your stories,I always thought the way Eragon And Roran met again was going!
| Pie in the Face chapter 5 . 6/29/2010
Yay! You used it! I can beta this story too, if you want, i can't PM cause i'm used mobile version...
Let's see... Ok, i don't know how i get these ideas but, Eragon, Saphira, and Arya (if you want) are scouting(?) or going on a mission somewhere (this is an idea off the top of my head) and have a quick run in with Murty and Torn. They have a battle and _ wins. Eragon gets a fair amount of injuries and they have to stop at the nearest town (Carvahall) for supplies, you get where I'm going...
Use it if you want
| Majide Bunny chapter 5 . 6/22/2010
That was Pretty Good. But you do have some grammatical errors like "I then heard Arya saw" and "I saw morn".I love how cocky Eragon was!
| Dawn that Shines chapter 4 . 6/9/2010
Ohhhh good job!
| Pie in the Face chapter 4 . 6/7/2010
I'm writing this from a Nintendo DSi (don't ask why) right now and it doesn't always display my username so it's Pie in the Face. :) I wanted to see what you did with the original and it's nice. I liked it, thanks for changing Arya's cover name, I hated it too, but when I was writing it, I didn't want a simple name to slow me down... So nice chapter and I'm looking for Chapter 3(?) of The Third Sapphire!
Oh, this just came to mind a minute ago so it's not that amazing: what if someone (maybe Roran) in Carvahall got deathly sick- Gertrude couldn't heal, The villagers have heard of a rider by rummor of the traders... They send a letter Varden and Eragon answers, he goes (with Arya if you want) and cures sick person of chose- Eragon explaines himself, etc. You get the picture
'till next time!
| TheLastHuman chapter 2 . 4/11/2010
Interesting plot, but the story is hard to read, because in the middle of a sentence it goes to another line, and it's
really annoying so if you think of a way to fix this it would be
| mafuyufufu chapter 3 . 4/8/2010
Good story! Keep it up!
| Pie in the Face chapter 3 . 4/5/2010
Interesting ideas... I don't have any suggestions 'cause I'm that creative. You're doing good but there's weird spacing. Keep updating!