Reviews for How I Spent My Time In Hell
HelloJustcomment chapter 4 . 2h ago
This has potential, but I'm sorry but this is hard to read. Too many things are going on all at once. Is this suppose to be in neko zombie's point of view? Also who was that blond guy in the beginning? Hell's chef, or Gregory?

You might want to re-read or have an editor to help a few of the problems with this fanfiction.

Just some grammar errors and a few things feel out of place as it feels like it's disorganized.

This is a good read but you might want to reword a few things. Good luck!

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Shay chapter 6 . 3/19/2012
o More.

MOOOOORRRRRREEEE.

please?c:
Yaoi-Beloved chapter 6 . 12/26/2010
:D I really like this. I actually thought that it was an Oc though lol.

Never thought it would be Neko xD

I had planned on making a SLASH YAOI fic with Gregory Horror Show.

The pairings I decided before was HellChef x OC(yaoi) and Neko x OC (Yaoi)But now I think I am going to make it HellChef x OC (yaoi) and Judgement Boy x OC(yaoi) and Neko Zombi x OC (not sure if i should do normal or YAOI) xD
kittyhumaniod chapter 5 . 6/30/2010
YAY! update :D
kittyhumaniod chapter 4 . 5/31/2010
I feel so alone as the reviewer for this story so far.
kittyhumaniod chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
THAT MUST BE PAINFUL...
kittyhumaniod chapter 2 . 4/30/2010
I am happy, i checked this story every day (:
kittyhumaniod chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Yay! There isn't enough G.H.S storys.