|Reviews for Getting Tan|
| NarikotheShadow chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Haha I knew the somehow people would find out hahaha so hilarious xD
| FUCKSHITASSHOLE chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
I loved it. :)
| OkieBTRsen chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
I loved the way Carlos seduced Kendall and took charge at the end. The honey was a nice touch.
| 11 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
this was one of this first m stories i ever read...still the hottest:)
| Kendalls LogieBear chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Lmaoo thatwas so funny and hot on so many levels.
I LOVED THE ENDING!
| Malachite chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Speedos, aka swim briefs, rock.
Ouch to the sunburn though...poor guys...
| TheHornyVirgin chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
The ending was hilarious! They whole time I was reading it, I was like "Won't someone see them?" This was so funny! It's so funny to picture Carlos holding an ice pack on his sun-burned butt. LOL! :D:D:D:D:D:D: *rolls on the floor laughing* Ooo, that would chafe! I don't think he and Kendall will be 'doing' much for a while! Ew, and you know your skin peels horribly when you get a sunburn. EW! LOL! :D LOVED IT!
| OrianPrime92 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
I bet Logan fainted if he saw them. XD
| LoseYourselfInMusic chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
| number1sasunarufan chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
lol the ending was hilariouse!
| Kylie Robbins chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
yeah...I was wondering if anyone could see them...
Anyhoo, I liked this. :]
You're good at smut. And lord is it addicting.
Although, I would like to see something more intense...maybe a little longer.
| TheCarlosPena chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
i am most definitly a naughty boi
amd james loves my speedos
| KatieRazzle chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
This was fantasmically wonderful.
You know what would be awesome? Maybe a POV from Logan and James in the pool...
You know, maybe they decide they like their friends doing stuff a little much...
And then theres some underwater (or under towel if they weren't in the water) touching and...
Ok, or you can ignore my random drooling there...
The pint it, I love the things you write haha
| iDylan chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Hahahaha! I couldn't help but laugh at the end, about everyone seeing and hearing them! xD I totally forgot about the pool while reading this, hah. And Carlos in a speedo.. I'm nearly drooling. xDD
& I second jakie Q. ;P
| R.A.I.731 chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
this is just to hot to comprehend...my mind is numb at the mind image of carlos in a speedo...wish it was james :)...love it!how do u manage to always make ur stories so sexy!