Reviews for The Nessie Chronicles
skullcandyklive chapter 2 . 6/1/2015
Appropriate progression with nessie's growth is very good. The subtle shift between nessie and jacob's relationship is creatively written. I must commend you with writing edward and bella's reaction because they are really appropriate.

I think that the dialogue should be improved to sound more natural loke 'that is' to 'that's.
That's just super nitpicky, but overall great chapter
skullcandyklive chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
All I can say that this a very unique and interesting way to start things off. I rarely see stories involving Nessie (that are worth reading anyway) I'm just really Glad to have found yours.

very realistic interaction between characters that I must commend greatly as well
HalleyJoe chapter 60 . 8/7/2014
Loved the story off to reading the next one :) keep up the good work.
guest chapter 39 . 11/15/2013
if nessie friking dies i will friking uhh it makes me so angry i dont know what i will do damn
Teamjacob1516 chapter 10 . 10/12/2013
I love this story
alixandria chapter 60 . 10/1/2013
Cannot wait for the sequal, you rock!
Jasimarra chapter 61 . 7/5/2013
Most wonderful story I have read! Way to go! Love the romance, mixed in with drama. Absolutly fabulous!
Guest chapter 14 . 6/29/2013
needs some hard core sex in it
cheysma2000 chapter 44 . 5/22/2013
I am still really enjoying this one. :)
cheysma2000 chapter 43 . 5/22/2013
The happy couple needed a little "alone" time.
cheysma2000 chapter 42 . 5/22/2013
Nice chapter for everyone to catch up with what happened.
cheysma2000 chapter 41 . 5/22/2013
Great chapter.
cheysma2000 chapter 40 . 5/22/2013
Awesome conclusion to the bomb and crazy Ethan. He was creepy!
cheysma2000 chapter 39 . 5/22/2013
The creep thinks he has done something great now that SWAT is there. I hope Edward gets him first or Jacob.
cheysma2000 chapter 38 . 5/22/2013
Ethan needs to die. He is pure evil.
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