Reviews for When Are You Going to Tell Him?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17
So...does Harry still look like the spitting image of James?
Gleas chapter 14 . 9/9
The fic started well and had me excited but it went down hill with the inconsistencies and sudden weird changes. Next time you pick up a fic after a few weeks, please read the chapters you already wrote to avoid this kind of thing. Otherwise the whle thing was pretty neat. Sorry for sounding like Hermione on a rant XD!
Gleas chapter 13 . 9/9
uh... The babies agreed upon names changed... and I thought Snape had the hots for McGonagall
Gleas chapter 12 . 9/9
Honestly! If Harry, sorry Horus, was a were... he'd have ripped apart the stupid Dursleys by now, especially with no wolfsbane being provided, seeing as no one actually knew he was Remus' son! You need to redo this fic... You're just changing things up as and when needed with no plausible reasons
Gleas chapter 11 . 9/9
From the premise you set up in the first few chapters, Horus is not afflicted (hence Fudge not getting his gold)... so why the hell is he undergoing a transformation? He isn't a werwolf according to the first few chapters or he'd have been expelled on the spot... And whatever happened to him looking like Remus? Is he using glamor spells? And I thought Lily didn't know about Remus being the dad...
Gleas chapter 7 . 9/9
ok... that was random... haven't wizards heard of the morning after pill?
DuchessMoonMoon13 chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Love these type of story
PiptheSnake chapter 14 . 10/29/2013
Ha, lol. Poor Snape. How'd he end up married to Luna; she's the same age as Harry, and shapes the same age as Harry's dad... Unless it's really au... Meh, this was good and I really enjoyed it
Guest chapter 7 . 8/6/2013
Did you seriously have to get Hermoine pregnant? I wouldn't normally care 'cause it's your fic, but they're thirteen!
EmmaM21 chapter 14 . 7/6/2013
I liked the idea of the story, but it was too fast pace for me and the ending was very confusing. It didn't make sense!
Child of Music and Dreams chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
Remus's wolf's name is Moony, not Moody.
Moody is the name of that crazy auror with the weird eye,
To the TARDIS chapter 6 . 5/22/2013
Is it Harry?
To the TARDIS chapter 5 . 5/22/2013
WHOOOOO GO HARRY (Hard to spell other name (sorry))
To the TARDIS chapter 4 . 5/22/2013
RL & HL bondingness
To the TARDIS chapter 3 . 5/22/2013
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