Reviews for Underneath the Underneath
CallMeHiromi chapter 1 . 1/6
How pretty!
Poodie chapter 1 . 10/18/2017
I myself am extremely proud of Ino's section. I was seriouy wondering what you would do for her XD But I loved all! Every single one. It really brought out a difference that I myself was having some trouble finding. I was a little sad that you hadn't done Gai's team, but with or without their sections this is beautifully amazing and basically perfect! The insight on each character. I mean, you made Ino a genius flat out (most people would just ignore her section because they think she's stupid) and that was so great! Ino is amazing!

I can't even single out any of these sections to say which is my favourite because I loved them all. Your writing style makes people stop and think for a moment. I believe that is too what I would like to do. I just can't express myself properly at all! Sasuke, Naruto, Hinata, Shino, Sakura -my gosh all of them! Every single one you've written about! I just can't get enough of this oneshot!

..Underneath what you can't or refuse to see...

~Poodie
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 1 . 8/19/2017
This is so good!
It's so amazing and well written!
And all these different feelings are attacking me right now!
And I'm feeling so annoyed at those teachers!
But this is so great!
I love this so much!
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 7/7/2017
you do a great job on the character studies!
Nalini-Singh175 chapter 1 . 3/26/2017
This is good, and there are a lot of well thought out points. but wouldn't it be nice if these points were focused in a more spread out chapter story? I just feel as though there are so many people writing one-shots like this. Even chapter stories are written in this pace and structure and it annoys me because there are just too many like this... i mean what happened to one pov stories where character development, secrets, and idea's happened or were dicovered over time instead of all within the first couple of chapters? What happened to stories that had limited to no Flashbacks and time skips? It would be so wonderful to read about how the teachers and jonin would react to learning these facts. Kind of like a vengeance thing with the respective characters gaining from it. Maybe they learned about thses points not long after they graduated (like the students) and set out to not only fix thses problems but to fix the academy. lol sorry for the rant, but i hope i made sense and maybe gave you an idea?
Boomer 001 chapter 1 . 2/11/2017
Nice one-shot.
NatNicole chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
This is BRILLIANT!
Elguardiuz chapter 1 . 9/8/2016
Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh SO GOOD
Ciekawa Osoba chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
*blinks and marvels* You somehow make character studies into better stories than Kishimoto can. Damn, that is skill.
[Poor Hinata and Sakura. I loved Ino's and Kiba's. Sasuke's and Naruto's made me want to throttle Iruka (or Mizuki).]
Bob chapter 1 . 3/26/2016
This is really deep... Especially if you're reading this at 4am after not sleeping the whole night...
Walk The Max Planck chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
I liked this. It was a nice little piece of character examination, giving some extra depth to some of the characters who didn't have much in the manga. I'd like to say other things too, but I'm having a hard time putting it into words. This was just a nice one shot that added some extra detail and interest to the characters and how the academy could miss things.
mangagirl18 chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
Excellent and intriguing piece.
Madame Minuit12 chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
that's brilliant :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
That was great an amazing read and one of the best alternate view stories I have ever read I hope u keep up the great work
Savvywolf chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
AHHH! I love this. The way you described each of the teams and their answers was perfect. I thought you did fine on Kiba's because we all want to be heard. The one I sympathized with most was Sakura and that made me think. You did a wonderful job.
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