Reviews for Getting to the Base
i-am-a-coffe-crazy-writer chapter 2 . 4/7/2010
Well, im not gonna flame or ridicule (my storys r starting to lose momentum; i feel ur pain!) sadly, i cannot adopt it. (oh, and ur not alone in the kissing virginity O.o meh.)

So i guess this was kind of a pointless review, i just appreciated the actual first chapter

i-am-a-crazy-coffe-writer
helikesitheymikey chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
don't let Draco marry Astoria please! *I'm begging here*
i-am-a-coffe-crazy-writer chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
dont dare me to do something thats physically impossible. (for me at least!) It's looking good so far. real cute. but, i would like to see some more descriptions of things: i.e. their clothes, ages, the baseball game-who is winning?-the people around them, astoria. stuff like that.

well, one thing hasn't changed about malfoy: he is very arrogant. arrogant enough to kiss a girl he hasn't seen in years, while being engaged to another. risky. very risky indeed.

otherwise very good my friend!