Reviews for Dreaming Of A Blue Christmas
FortunesRevolver chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
I'm not sure if you plan to continue this, but I really think you should. The idea holds a lot of potential, and I think it would be interesting to see how it turns out. There are a lot of grammatical errors, however, and a few spelling issues as well. For this I would recommend a BETA, but as far as the storyline goes, you seem to be doing just fine. I do hope you choose to write more of this, and I look forward to anything you might add.
LionOfPersia chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Nice story!I like how you mentioned the jealousy bit there, I could almost imagin the death looks they shoot(shivers)Please continue with this good story!