|Reviews for Sins of the Father|
| sakari-x chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Wow! That was an amazing beginning. Loved the whole thing, Bella really let him know what she really thought. Looking forward to see how the story unfolds.
| lindyrb chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
Just found this new story of yours, and read her "Letter" in the prologue and cracked up. Oh my gawd...I SO hope Edward heard about and read it...would LOVE to see him meet and talk with her about it...or would that be "confront" her. His camp would have hooted and laughed and while Edward might be insulted, he'd at least have to appreciate her passion and chutzpa.
Looking forward to more.
| bellamarie117 chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
Great start hun! I really enjoyed the whole set up for Bella and her various relationships. Demitri was awesome, Renee was wonderfully horrible and you've got a really great take on Alice. Bella is snarky and a hard ass and I love it. I can picture her being all adorably british too.
Are you doing EPOV and BPOV or just BPOV? I'm so excited to read more!
| deleepowman chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
You go girl. Bella needs to keep riding this wave now and be strong.
| deleepowman chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Great attention getting opening. Edward seems like he needs a musical wake up call and maybe Bella's blog will reawaken the
burned out cliched musician he seems to have become. Definitely will keep reading. Rosalie/EDward?
| dazzled72 chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
great chapter! Can't wait to find out more!
| Melba87 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
i am a complete ignoramous when it comes to music. but it's a world i've always loved to read about. this first chapter has completely sucked me in. brilliantly written because i am completely hooked! i am dying to know how bella's complete and utter discust with someone she used to revere will be turned around. And hopefully respect and love will find a place to be nurtured, no? that's what i dream of for these characters and this first chapter has convinced me that this will be an intrigueing journey.. can't wait. (i totally miss Volterra Rocks, and i'm eager to read more of your irresistable discriptions of rocker boys. salut!)
| Smiles4Twilight chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Haha! This made me laugh SO hard!
| mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
I'm in love already.
| colourfulchatterbox chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
I really like this :) Cannot wait to hear more :)
| barbarito chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
LOVED IT! Looking forward to more
| WhisperedHopes chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
Great to see more of Bella's side of things - sigh, I wish I had twitter. Anyways, great chapter :)
| Dogmom1 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
WOW...just wow! I am looking forward to this.
| colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
I like this :) Cannot wait to read the rest of it :)
| SnarkyDee chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
I like it so far, can't wait to see where it goes ;)