|Reviews for Ash and Dawn: together|
| Kuro chapter 15 . 11m
Yup. Me again. Where are the 3 remaining chapters m8? I'll keep rereading until you post em. Don't keep me waiting too long. -
| PILL0WTALK chapter 1 . 17h
PLEASE UPDATE! I read the entire thing, now just waiting for the next chapter!
| AshXDawnFOREVER chapter 1 . 10/18
hello I'm back You better make mode because I FUCKING love this story PLEASE make the last 3 chapters to the story please!
P.S. LOVE YOU 3
| Super fanboy1369 chapter 15 . 10/16
3 chapters? 3 CHAPTERS? They better be as long as a mega Rayquaza orgy
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12
This is a work of art the best fic Ive ever read
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/9
Please make more because you are amazing at making fanfiction's like I read you one day and I didn't even know that you're this great at it and I read the first chapter of this fanfiction and I literally fucking one in sane of how good it was just because of how great it was are you are you had to finish and I read it in two days I don't know how but I did and I cannot be more happy myself for doing it I keep it real though because you are great at the stuff and I'm not I'm not even trying to make you feel like Owens like you're so cool but like you really are amazing and I'm just like I may I am happy that you were just a thing because well you make awesome fanfiction I don't know if I read one of your other ones not even knowing who the hell you were and I really liked it so keep up the good stuff man you deserve as much good support as you can and all the haters out there go fuck yourself (I don't know my friend said that he didn't like shipping as in as in dominant so I really don't know what the hell yo I don't know my friend said that he didn't like shipping as in not liking ash x dawn which made me sad because like so many people make so much good fan or a fan which made me sad because like so many people make so much good fan fiction and fan art it's just amazing how much people put what this kind of stuff into it's like you're so cool cool I'm sorry for keeping the making this I I don't know what to say about this I think my three favorite chapters were 13,3,14 and 6 I don't know why but those are my just my favorite chapters I don't know what keep it real and keep it going I'm going to read you that's a really bad what are you going to read whole of your fanfiction and I really hole cut you like that I will do that I am probably might not use the same name AshXDawnforever dats me but I might you name around stores if you ever see your name like that then that's me) :D
| diamondez chapter 13 . 10/1
that was good
| Lambo777 chapter 1 . 10/1
I've followed this entire story and wow, just wow. I'm sad that there are only three chapters left and I hope that you find time to write a sequel :). Also can't wait for the rest of the story!
| SceptileMan12 chapter 15 . 9/28
This fic is perfect Ihope you write more when it ends
| albertinstein120 chapter 15 . 9/26
Yay, nice story looking forward to the update chapter.
| wes27 chapter 8 . 9/21
Really there is such a thing as hentai doujins, i should probably look into that
| wes27 chapter 15 . 9/21
Oh iTS on, i really hope the chapters don't take too long cause i just started Reading the thing and that mabey you could write a Sequel to the story that is if you want. Cause so far I really am enjoying the story, keep up the good work
| wes27 chapter 14 . 9/21
Oh man, this chapter was even better with the sex than the previous two.
| wes27 chapter 13 . 9/21
I would never have imagined may being into this kind of stuff.
| wes27 chapter 12 . 9/21
The fact alone that dawn would allow this is reason enough for this chapter to be awesome