Reviews for Ash and Dawn: together |
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![]() ![]() SOOO YUMYYYY |
![]() ![]() YUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMM!1!111! |
![]() ![]() YUUUUMMMM |
![]() ![]() harrr yumyum |
![]() ![]() YUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMM! |
![]() ![]() YUMMYYYYYYYYY |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok this was good but A couple things 1 I gotta be honest by due the ending sucked I mean you hint really strongly that there's more to this. No proposal no wedding ? And kid you mean pepple up pikachu ummm...? Ok ? I mean I Wouldn't call those kids but okay. It just doesn't feel like an ending On top of that concern would happen in chapter 17 They were Boyfriend and girlfriend But then assumingly they broke up why ? And then went back you no I love her but no we're just friends ? Ummmm? Wat ? Why ? I was a little confused at that. And i'm not gonna lie There's a part of me wishing you had stuck with harem But then again i'm sure you can tell By my name why I would say that cough cough lol. However I will say pearl shipping will always be my second favorite And I think We like one another , but let's hide it Everyone um why ? But don't get me wrong Story is great and yeah I just recently found this but at least that's my take. |
![]() ![]() Future fanfic where dawn and ash give each other golden showers and drink each others pee directly from the source please |
![]() ![]() Cool fanfic I would love to see a fanfic where ash has a foot fetish and has a thing for dawns bare feet and she gives him plenty of foot jobs when she finds out about his fetish she will catch ash looking at her bare feet and he reveals his foot fetish to dawn and she finds his fetish cute and adorable and is happy honored smug proud and thrilled ash loves her feet so much this fanfic will be called dawn finds out ash has a foot fetish |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gee... Hahaha. For a bunch of clueless teens they sure agreed to what this is quickly. But I suppose if they don't really want to put a lable on their relationship, then that is their choice. What other people say does not matter, after all what happens between them is their choice and no one else's. Only the opinions of those closest to them matter! Oh, wow... I never thought I'd put up this kind of tried but here I am! This story is good I keep going back to it! |
![]() ![]() Also Johanna lick ash and brock armpits |
![]() ![]() Add brock and add double penetration 2 cocks in Johanna pussy and ass Make Johanna a biggest slut She drink ash and brock pee and rimmed their asses and eat their shit for dinner Then take whole ash's face head in her pussy like unbirthing |
![]() ![]() Honestly anyone can point out Buneary likes Pikachu. Dawn has a Pikaclone(Pachirasu) they both have a Quilava. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sex is good (that is true). But sex with the RIGHT person is inexplicable, something beyond this world. applies to this situation. This is not thought due to experience, it is more of a spur of the moment kind of statement. |