Reviews for In Five Pieces
Nami Heartfilia chapter 2 . 4/14
Actually, having an archaeologist is relevant right now with where the plot is going... I mean, how will they read poneglyphs and find where Raftel is?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6
Have you ever considered writing a story about this? Like, not just short stories but from start to finish. Like how Luffy got his Supernova Crew. I think it would be awesome!
GraySnowie chapter 4 . 12/17/2015
Wooo! This was the best One Piece fanfic I've read so far! (but then again, I've only read a handful). Replacing the Strawhats with the Supernovas was creative in its own right, and I could definitely see this story really happening as an alternate story, especially with the way you assigned them roles that were perfect for their personality. And I love Trafalgar and the scary way you portrayed him was just hilarious!
And this would most definitely be the darker version of the Once Piece from the other reality. The Dark Doctor Trafalgar instead of adorable Chopper. The Thousand Stormy instead of the Thousand Sunny. And let's not forget that Kid and Killer are in the crew now. The Supernova Eleven, each member powerful in their own right.
Looking forward to your future updates and stories! And kudos to you for writing something so enjoyable to read :)
Thorn D. Cinni chapter 3 . 11/8/2015
Zoro... the scout. Ha.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/8/2015
You know, to be fair, Drake said "If I die". So since he didn't die, Law technically is allowed to remove his organs and put them in jars for display.
xxxrae97xxx chapter 4 . 7/21/2015
Man this is fucking fantastic. 10/10 shorts got me hyped and wishing it was a full fic.
great fucking job man
T51b Moridin chapter 4 . 5/7/2015
Coolio.
T51b Moridin chapter 3 . 5/7/2015
rofl. Zoro as scout i don't even. And capone for treasurer? Someone drank the koolaid.
T51b Moridin chapter 2 . 5/7/2015
So not gonna lie this would make one of the most insane groups. How they would not kill each other. Kidd makes the frowny face thousand stormy. THe thousand sunny with an angry lion face. Hawkins the clairvoyant...rofl. Bink's Sake remix from Apoo oooh ye. I guess the better question is...what happened to Usopp and his island and Kaya, what happened to Nami and her Island who were all going to be killed and enslaved, what happened to Vivi and alabasta who were all going to be killed/ enslaved, chopper?, franky?, is Robin still on the run or dead? I guess a lot could change and many could die while many could live instead. Its interesting how a different crew could change lives so easily thanks to motivators being totally different.
T51b Moridin chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Lol...This would make a rather interesting story lets face it.
bakasaru264 chapter 1 . 4/27/2015
Sooooo Bonney is the first mate!? God nooo!
InkStar145 chapter 4 . 3/29/2015
Wow this is great. They would make such a terrifying and wonderful crew.

Thanks for the lovely story!
Ecris-vains en formation chapter 4 . 1/29/2015
... Okay, my mind is blown. That was Amazing ! I always liked the supernova but you made them incredibly awesome ! I'm soooo happy that you made a longer story of your drabbles : They where great and I can't wait to read more of your story
Dawww now I want to make a Supernova-StrawHat crew story too... Bah, I'll go take a look at your story right now since I can't wait. Once again I loved your 'writing exercise'. Look like exercising is good for you ;-)
Shattermirror chapter 4 . 12/1/2014
Oh, poor Drake... Stop messing with him, Law! By the way, I completely empathize Bonney, I really do.
Lucinda M. H. Cheshir chapter 4 . 9/26/2014
These little pieces have given me much enjoyment and laughter. Thank you thank you thank you for deciding to expand it into a full-blown fic!
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