Listen, I know the story is published and already has a ton of reviews. But the ending and all these prologue Ms written out of order is confusing as hell. The story itself is beautiful. Is there any way you can reorder than last 10 chapters so everything happens in order? I was looking for Superbowl 1 and instead got Superbowl 2. Looking for Emmett’s Dancing story but it’s after other stuff. This is such a great story and it should end as well as it starts. Please reorder it. Thanks again.

Also, your football detail is quite remarkable. You are a great writer but that’s a level of detail even I appreciate. Cheers.

Great story! First time reading your stuff (I know I'm slow but I was a Christian and Ana fan first). I found your stories on a recommend from ValeP.

Loved it. Great story.

The first chapter was great and sooo interesting but the following ones became slow and very sweet. so I was entertained but it could be better

I have been a fan of yours for years, but this is my first time reading this story. I love Cockyback and Reed Girl, and Words with Friends (and Strangers). I have read those several times each and I'm glad I gave this a chance. I am not a sports fan so most of that just goes right over my head, but you still keep the story flowing beautifully for us layman. Thanks for writing.

i love this story.

So so so good. Love football and love your work. Thanks for your brilliant writing and giving us these works. 3

I've never laughed so hard reading a fanfic. This is effing priceless. I just can't.. dying here.

oh wow they bout to really do it?

I hope Doctor Cullen wasn't trying to do what it seems because it looks like he was shipping the two which is the ultimate goal but it's way too soon he barely knows the girl.

Hi friend! I feel like we need more future takes!

Just read this again. Love it

Awesome…

Edward needs to change his locks. I wouldn’t be surprised if Emmett stopped for copies.

With friends like them, who needs enemies. They constantly cross the line, it would drive me crazy to be publicly embarrassed regularly. Talking about their sex lives in front of Bella’s parents was unbelievable. Emmett takes the cake, for all he knew Renee’s sculptor was a real work of art and had sentimental value. It wasn’t unimaginable that Renee could likely be in tears right now.