Reviews for First & Ten
Maria chapter 25 . 5/23/2015
Hey! I found your story last week and I can stop reading! Love it! Really good! Congrats.
Jptexas chapter 55 . 4/19/2015
I just read again the whole story and missed this guys. Can you please write another outtake? Please?...
annaofthedawn chapter 55 . 4/18/2015
Re-reading from the start your stories just get better
MizzVicki chapter 29 . 4/17/2015
Rec-cy rec-cy !
Anonymous chapter 55 . 4/14/2015
Truly amazing story - I loved it!
Guest chapter 23 . 4/13/2015
Awwww! I loved this chapter. And as always, you outdid yourself with Emmett, lol. Bravo!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
Wonderful story! XOXO,Cheri
Gagika chapter 55 . 4/11/2015
Hey !
I have devoured this fiction - i love love love love love it - so authentic.
Their was so many that i loved: Bella has no filter (she boomed out so many funny things - Edwards finger; exclamation 'porn' at the beginning of the story.
Chapter 12 and 13 (also the sex in the locker room and at the field) were damn hot - i must cooling down myself. Then die laughing at the part of Bella is laughing at the view of Edwards cock - omg.

The particular characters are well-elaborated; especially two of them: Alice, a very good best friend, which everybody, me too, would loved to have. Emmet and his overconfident - god, i love him: he is doing a shirtless belly dance (what the fuck?) - i would like to see this - pleeeaaase :-) or Rose is telling, that he is coming with a towel around his hip at the first meeting of her parents; then his golden pants - god, i like that imagination!
Jasper and Rose are similarly persons, who are always stand by side of their friends - fantastic.
The auction was also so funny: the revelation of names of their cocks - i laughed so much as Emmet would to check the length and Jasper says succinct who's the biggest one.

The chapter that included that Esme is maybe sick with cancer was so sad - i have cried.
Cancer is on everyone's lips - that's why it's so scary. Bella has tooked good care of Edward - so much love.

The first meeting with Bellas parents is coming - oh yeah - i feel embarrassed for her - which weird but truly lovely mother: i mean a vibrator? Much worse was the christmas present that their get - Edwards torso as a bust? :-)
About the question from Renee to Carlisle: "So, Carlisle, are you as built as your son is?" - i has roared with laugher. She is so outspoken.

So, i had already existing interest in football (unfortunately i have no knowledge about the rules of playing football - might i change my inexperience with the help of 'wikipedia'). :-)

Well, i have to go - bye (i hope my english grammar is not too bad) - greetings from germany!

PS i like to read the outtakes, especially that from Ryan or both get their tattoos.
Nicole2581 chapter 19 . 4/9/2015
I am really enjoying your 'Buddy' character. He's a breath of fresh air. :-)
Nicole2581 chapter 18 . 4/9/2015
I think this is my favorite chapter so far. I swear it has nothing to do with the hot, post game locker room charades, hehehe. Another 5 stars! ;-)
Nicole2581 chapter 16 . 4/9/2015
A mothers intuition, lol. I can totally relate to Esme.

My son, whom I had at the young age of 16, is a mini version of 'Twilights Edward'. Or so he's told regularly by family, friends and random people alike. He's freshly 17 and had just started dating a really sweet girl about 6 months ago. I knew he was dating just by the way he would smile or laugh out loud while texting, the way he all of the sudden began to care more about his appearance or when he began asking 'theoretical' questions about what girls was a dead giveaway, lol. Mothers know best!

Great chapter! Thank you for sharing!
Nicole2581 chapter 15 . 4/9/2015
Mmmmmmmm...I love me some Quarterback Edward! drools
Nicole2581 chapter 14 . 4/8/2015
I absolutely ADORE your Emmett! He brightens up every chapter that he's in. Honestly your version of Emmett is better than S.M.'s Emmett. Hands down!
Nicole2581 chapter 13 . 4/8/2015
sighs dreamily
Nicole2581 chapter 11 . 4/8/2015
Oh my GOSH! I freaking LOVE Emmett! He's hilarious! And the shrine? A I haven't laughed like this in too long! 5 ***** chapter!
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