Reviews for First & Ten
kelysuperficial chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
Aw! Buddy is pure WIN. You sure know how to write characters that we can fall in love with!

Em and Alice also rule.

And the line about the semi new tits too ;-)

And, me being a nosy h00r, is there a reason Bella was covering ROBINSON High?hmm?
EnchantedbyTwilight chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
Love it! Looking forward to the interview as well -
Guest chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
So great as usual. This is one of the few stories I drop everything for to read. Loved Buddy and I loved Edward's reaction by pulling the car over.
itlnbrt chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
So much fun! Emmett is quite hilarious. I always get a kick out of his quick come backs!

Thanks for all these updates!
sweetchocalte chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
AWESOME i loved this chapter!
Gamegirl452 chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
Omg! Literally as I was writing the review for the last chapter your update came up! Totally awesome!

Love this chapter more than the last but I'm sure not as much as the next. I'm very glad to hear that buddy is ok and that bella isn't going to lose her job and still gets to cover Edward games. Haha loving the whole hot ass thing and te Lauren and Jessica asking questions was hilarious. I can't wait for them to find out it's bella.

Emmetts such a gossip but we love him and I loved the whole Alice getting legal on teds ass! Go pixie!

So looking forward to the next chapter i know it's selfish nut update soon pretty pretty please

Gg452 xoxoxoxox
Mrs. M Cullen chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
Though I'm sad we didn't get the parents it was still a great chapter! I love Buddy too! Keep it up! Happy New Year to you too!
annaofthedawn chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
woot! Chief liar is forgiven. Loving Buddy in this chapter! Great substitute Dad :) Also laughed at Emmett a lot! Edward's gonna get major props! Obviously wanting to read about 'meeting the parents' but now wanting the 'Gruesome Twosome' to realise that Edward Cullen is a taken man :)
BixieR chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
That chapter was brilliant, and I loved Buddy's reaction. And Alice's rant would be hilarious to read! Really, if you suddenly feel like you can't write and you need to blow off some steam, write it down and post it, please? :p And Emmett...all I can say is that I love that big bear of a man!

Great work and I can't wait until your next update!

/Bixie
Gamegirl452 chapter 18 . 1/3/2011
Wow as ever an amazing chapter. I read it as soon as it was posted but as I was on Xmas hops couldn't post a review. Sorry!

It was really good to see the first chapter through Edwards eyes in line with the story. I am officially on tenter hooks awaiting the next chapter I can't wait. What is everyone going to say about them? What is everyone in the office going to think? I hope buddy is going to be ok.

Nice again a bloody brilliant chapter looking forward to the next one.

Gg452 xoxoxox
Tennisgirl101 chapter 18 . 1/3/2011
Hi! I was just wondering if you were going to update today. I have been glued to my computer all day waiting for the update because I am so freaking excited. Love the story so far. It is amazing! Will this next update have them going public? You should have a scene where her co-workers find out who Mr. Panera is :)

Love,

TennisGirl101
Fiddlestyx chapter 12 . 1/3/2011
*"Porn." Well, I'd have to go get that out of my special locked cabinet in theā€¦.what the fuck did she just say?* LMAO
baseballshoppingmomma chapter 18 . 1/2/2011
Can't wait for her to meet the family! Hopefully no word vomit included but we all know Bella and Carlisle and Esme will love her anyway!
jerseyhalliwell chapter 18 . 1/2/2011
this chapter epic win so worth waiting for :)
mycrookedsmile chapter 18 . 1/1/2011
so much fun to hear him tell it! Love how irritated E was at the beginning. heh.

For some reason I was thinking Carlisle & Esme had already met Bella but I guess not lol.
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