Speaking as a woman (with daughters) nothing about this tutoring situation is safe or appropriate for Bella. She went to a strangers house, and he was sexually inappropriate. She also watched him treat another woman like a dog.
Tutoring should be done in a safe environment surrounded by others with rules of interaction in place.
Makes me sad that this completely hazardous premise is how someone began a fanfic.

Paul's last name is Lahote

I enjoyed the story, but I feel the chapters were too repetitive with a Bella POV then a Paul POV. I think it would be better to have the character with more insight be the POV and not repeat the story line. There were times I was getting bored because of the repetitiveness. I still enjoyed the pairing.

love it!

Omg!
Loved it from beggining to end!
One of the best stories I have read! D

I would love to have a house on a lake!

Hope Paul finds them soon!

WTF? I thought he wasn't coming back!

loving It!

Haha nurse and patient! He always says things that have double meanungs!

Oh Shit!
Hope Doucheward dies

Wonder how Doucheward will act...

Mmmm...Wonder how he is going to act...

He is turning into a big soft teddy bear

Loving It!