Reviews for We Belong
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 19 . 10/8/2012
'I choose you and that's it. But I'll never forgive you for this! I hope that along the way you'll never regret this choice you made me make.'

You tell him like it is Bella! These vampires and werewolves have got to stop with all the animosity and hostility and the discrimination along with condemning one another.
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 7 . 10/8/2012
Paul can take me on a drive anytime ;)
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 6 . 10/8/2012
'He omitted the fact that she said that you needed to be taught a lesson." - Jared classic!
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 5 . 10/8/2012
hahahahah oh my gosh priceless. Who knew Bella had guts like that. ALMOST felt sorry for Paul.

Awwww Jacob.
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 4 . 10/8/2012
You must be insane if you think for a moment that I'm gonna stay with that girl! I want a way out. Talk with the Elders, do anything in your power. I can even stop phasing, but please, Sam, take me out of this shitty imprint!" OUCH Paul!

Jared he's my second favorite werewolf after Paul. Hopefully, him and Kim are featured much in this fanfic.
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 3 . 10/8/2012
LOL typical to get such advices from jessica
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 2 . 10/8/2012
ahhahahaha he wanted dark gorgeous beauty.
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
hahahaha! Poor Bella must have been frightened out of her wits not only was he in anger mode but oh the gods Paul is irresistible!
An Avid Reader Forever chapter 34 . 10/2/2012
the ending was so sweet. the whole story was really good
What chapter 24 . 10/2/2012
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What the hell is that?
Jalice223 chapter 34 . 9/29/2012
Great story, I loved the ending and glad you didn't kill Edward.
darkness2light65 chapter 6 . 9/16/2012
Ahahah woooww push-ups?
I was laughin while picturing tht
Bell 1 chapter 34 . 9/14/2012
I really enjoyed this story, but I think it would have been better if you wrote it all in third person because the pretty much repeated POV (same coversations and not a lot of variance) made it more difficult.

HOWEVER, the story line was good, the writing wasn't bad and I enjoyed your Paul. I even enjoyed your Bella. Jake was a little, well, Jake, but I'm glad he finally accepted and realized that Bella and Paul were mates.

I'm also glad Edward was "spared" and realized the truth. I would have liked to see Bella & Paul married and their children, but this was also a very nice ending.
Luv4RobPattz chapter 34 . 8/23/2012
I just read this story and loved, loved, loved it!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/23/2012
I was really loving this fic up until this chapter. I still love it, but something is really bothering me. Paul goes through this big speech about how he's different than Edward and he's not going to lie to her or betray her. He tells her how he feels and that he'll always be up front and honest with her about everything and that she can trust him with her heart. And then he DOESN'T TELL HER HE'S A WEREWOLF. There were several perfect opportunities to do so. He knows she's aware of the supernatural and that she's not prejudiced. He knows she even heard his tribal legends, and given that she's aware that half of that equation (the cold ones) are real, it won't be a big stretch for her to realize the wolves are real too. I love the Paul you created in this fic, but it seems really out of character for him not to be honest about this with her. It's not like she's just some girl he's dating: she's his imprint. That means she's allowed to know. I understood why he didn't tell her right away: they were both fighting against the pull to each other and they didn't know each other very well. But when he went out of his way to prove to her that she could trust him, he should've told her about him and the imprinting. Now, if she finds out some other way, knowing Bella she's going to assume it's a bad thing and it means he never wanted her for real but was forced to be with her because of the imprint. It'll make her question everything, whereas if he told her right now while they were both delving into their pasts and opening up to each other on a deeper level, she'd be OK with it.
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