Reviews for We Belong
Candylover778 chapter 8 . 2/1
Wonder if Bella will fall...
Candylover778 chapter 6 . 2/1
Hahaha hope the kitten wins!
Wonder what Paul is going to do next...
Candylover778 chapter 4 . 2/1
Hahaha! I wanna feel bad for him but I can't he deserves it!
Candylover778 chapter 3 . 2/1
Hahahahaha Hope he pays!
Candylover778 chapter 1 . 2/1
LMFAO! Hahaha yeah she defenetely is the 1st one to fall at his feet!

Haha hope Paul doesn't know what hit him!
Kvan chapter 34 . 12/31/2020
Enjoyed this
southernpur-rica chapter 34 . 12/27/2020
Absolutely loved this story!
SunflowerSunflowerVol.6 chapter 34 . 11/16/2020
Good story. I wasn’t a fan of the POV switching and the extra fluff but still good!
SunflowerSunflowerVol.6 chapter 11 . 11/16/2020
Paul makes me blush oh lord
SunflowerSunflowerVol.6 chapter 9 . 11/15/2020
Ahh they’re so awkward together I love it
SunflowerSunflowerVol.6 chapter 6 . 11/15/2020
Ok I really like this story so far however one critique I have is that I feel like the jump between POV isn’t really necessary. I feel like it’s just repetitive and doesn’t serve much purpose. I feel like this could be easily achieved by switching to Paul’s POV after their interactions and getting his reaction that way because I feel like reading the same scene in both povs is a bit much. Or alternate povs for different events but reading both sides takes away from the momentum of the story in my opinion.
Debbie Hicks chapter 34 . 2/17/2020
35. The End 2
too late Alien venom then ate his blood so he sharing then to best friends then With Aliens/Vulcans en to other best friends suddenly three wre wholliedst drained Vplturi hesard of their affair thn Kidnapped herr/him they this couple shardedc yiu are puniushed do experiments herdself screamed then gthe tired up tortured boit bitds sas all of it ghen Experimentd with brain surgeries then erased memoriesd herself was with implantd children eiuight at 10 months was painful yu lied for then theb herself sicker frailer weaker but in poor health was so sick then Vomited blood her cruel smile were growing fsatr too ]big then Infectd her skin was gaunt but frailer then too late was infecyted by the alien venom tell us Spleen and appendix were removed fifty-nine to three taken then too late Her kids killed her by breaking freely then the alien venom was real good with they then Erased of memories newspapers showed a Anmesiac Red eyed Isabella Lahote resurrected from help brainwashed with him/they had hair longer with bangs these we their carnivorous selves too late Alice found her sickest gfrailr weakr of blood loss then brought them to have hybrid kidds grew vey too big the Volturi found her useless who turned you tell us then we offered her/him/army protection then take them out with her/they then Bella was killed with child by Aro with him then they with they wit the witnesses With three tore heads Nothingness brought there good guard the mother/deformed young dead with him both four lost had hybrids you Irina/others die there screams of them then Executed both burning both were as all of ashes good more Volturi guards bitten freely with they exploding good never have kids then too late Nuked now they finished her humanity and virginity was stolen from her with him with they sliced freely became blood bonded officially infected smashed with them vanished good never are there on Earth rid of them with freaks at once then herself never aged of it Alice she was forced to mate with him both gasp too late the world evolved it changed dramatically suffered from ;loss of family friends and loved ones was heartbreaking hair grew too long with bangs her skin was from as all of bites aloe vera vapor-rubbed but lotions oils creams with Vulcan scented oils lathered then took as from here from the NASA Bodysuits were Starfleet iuniforms/heel/boots smashed Poisoned then with the kids never returned good they expanded count are low then experiment on them then Destroyed then newspapers reported as all of the corpses cremated good they are waxen in gauze najked dead aged of it are oldest but ancient people nuked more than Volturi members good more than as all of them finished we train them there too late Alice had a vision herself a very powerful self-defensive mental and physical shield was too mostly powerful Alice she's gifted so they so her great-grandchildren we need witnesses to see the kids aged to be teenagers of the venom made her telepathic it really happen herself/they nuked both sliced first death was possessed by her host trained harder then newspapers of a golden/black eyed reincarnated Isabella Lahote never aged haven't died held up her NASA Protype gun fired phaser bullets was Starfleet strong but Federation marine powerful led a true army nuked tore freely Heads brought there good then cremated them tell them they are dead then Ashes then no longer alive became immortal good they are wandereres and nomadic they can't return to Earth are on Vulcan met rest wiped out things deported then too late no longer alive.
AliceCullen0629 chapter 34 . 1/31/2020
great story very good wish there was more
babymama2020 chapter 8 . 1/4/2020
If im being honest i love the story line so far but you grammar suck ass im just glad i know what you are talking about. Also you dont need to have both of their POV'S in different chapters all you have to do is write in 3rd person POV. But i do like your story.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2019
If she had any self respect she would have left immediately, filed a complaint of sexual harassment with the school and never went back. Also, she is in no way safe going to the house of a complete stranger w/social and education issues. This story is completely flawed immediately out of the gate.
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