|Reviews for Broken|
| Scarletty chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
It was really cool how you cast Lieutenant Tomathren is such a positive light, not as a glory-seeking fool, but as a charming young warrior who inspires those under his command. The relationship between Valanna and Tomathren was less strained and much more heartbreaking, them all alone and hurt together in the creepy old forest. It's an awesome story and I would love to see more of it because you make them "quite a pair".