Reviews for Finally Whole
Tiltman.bbb chapter 76 . 6/25
This was a great read well done
Guest chapter 8 . 5/15
I am writing this in the nicest way possible. In twilight, the name of the pack member is Jared, not Jarrod. Also, Lauren is the blonde and Jessica is the brunette. Therefore, if you are going to change the story, you at least need to let the readers know either at the beginning of the story, or per chapter. However, if it is unintentional, i suggest you let the readers know that you are not all that familiar with the story or you simply do not care. Do not claim to follow such a story if you cannot even bother to remember characters names or hair colors.
Guest chapter 43 . 4/3
Paul's last name is Lahote not Meraz
Fishpuppy chapter 50 . 2/23
Now I want cookies
rrochelle465 chapter 76 . 2/5
I can't wait to read it...
rrochelle465 chapter 75 . 2/5
What a great story I hate to see it end I can't wait to read the sequel...
rrochelle465 chapter 74 . 2/5
Yay things are great...
rrochelle465 chapter 73 . 2/5
Wow what a year...
rrochelle465 chapter 72 . 2/5
Poor Paul I hope he can do this...
rrochelle465 chapter 71 . 2/5
Irina has her own plan I hope for her sake she has a change of heart...
rrochelle465 chapter 70 . 2/5
Poor Tanya she don't get that Edward don't want her...
rrochelle465 chapter 69 . 2/5
Here we go again I hope for paul peace of mind things go smoothly ...
rrochelle465 chapter 68 . 2/5
Somebody is in a lot of trouble...
rrochelle465 chapter 67 . 2/5
I am glad that bella Charlie Carlisle and esme was able to control the situation...
rrochelle465 chapter 66 . 2/5
Hmmm things just got very interesting ...
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