|Reviews for Smile Smile|
| The destroyer of fate chapter 3 . 1/10/2013
well on that note i hope to see more . or was this an end to it ?
(sicne that could work out as an ending)
| FabDuwangIsFab chapter 3 . 5/6/2011
plz cont and make sak x female naruto !
| Athla chapter 3 . 9/13/2010
Now this is damn interesting.
looking forward to more.
| ShadowCub chapter 3 . 9/6/2010
This naruto is a idiot beyond belief, stay for
a beating, going to school where they don't want
you and accepting it?
Looks like this village found their idiot.
Great beginning, but I thought this one had
some guts, martyrs really make me sick.
| Yukihana Hisako chapter 3 . 8/14/2010
Wow. THis is a really good story. I happen to like this kind of fic. (THe dead-yet-alive-Naruto) I hope to see more soon.
| PandaLove98 chapter 3 . 5/16/2010
her treatment is so terrible! I hope she leaves the village. Looking forward to your next update!
| EDelta88 chapter 3 . 5/2/2010
You know, she's not a Kunoichi so they can't keep her from leaving the village, kind of ironic really, they wouldn't let her advance and because of that they have no way to control her
| XPGamer chapter 3 . 4/20/2010
| Libello chapter 3 . 4/15/2010
Well then, that was interesting. Very intriguing and while not original idea for a story, a very original way of writing it. And I must say I liked all of your story a lot. It's a very promising start and I'm certain it will only get better.
The most intriguing thing is your character portrayal, which I find to my uttermost liking. Crazy, slightly delusional characters somehow fall into my liking rather fast. Strange, I know. Naruko is a bundle of awesomeness, really.
I like the writing style of yours. It's crude, down and gritty yet still depicting and flowing, and brings forth emotions - it's perfectly done coupled with the first person point of view and I've rarely seen such quality on this site. And I must say, the quality of your text is much beter than most authors on this site and only found a few mistakes throughout the chapters, I commend you.
Question; how old is Naruko here? Didn't pick that fact up.
Anyway, think that's all for now. Thank your for making the time for creating this story which I implore you to update soon. While you do that, I'm going to read your other stories. Can't wait to see how this story will splay out in the future.
| The Dark Side Has Yaoi chapter 3 . 4/14/2010
| lilmagi chapter 3 . 4/14/2010
Wow Very interesting story.
With how your described Naruko smiling serenely, i cant help but get an image of her in the future slaughtering people and smiling while doing so. Something like Shizuka from Mai Hime :P
I have a question. Why did you chose 18 year old Naruko? And if that's her age, than on what age do normally people graduate, 15?
Only thing that actually is nit-picky to me is that one time you refer to Naruko in third person and another time in first person.
I know you started this story to explore your new style, but please keep updating. I realy love it :D
| ChrisD chapter 3 . 4/13/2010
This story is interesting and I am certainly keen on seeing how the plot develops, I do however feel that some of your earlier stories such as “A fox in a cage” would benefit from further development as much as this one.
| kpsanimefan chapter 3 . 4/9/2010
Neat cant wait for more
| Fayneir chapter 3 . 4/9/2010
Another great chapter. I really hope she doesnt stay in Konoha. I'm really enjoying this fic. I'm curious as to who is going to be paired with Naruto.
| They call me Bruce chapter 3 . 4/9/2010
Good work here, fella.