Reviews for I'm Not Your Sister
Guest chapter 20 . 9/12/2016
Epic Fan-Fiction. "I can't marry you". That line shot me in the heart straight away... Lightning, comfort your little sister... She needs you...
Guest chapter 9 . 9/12/2016
The Tension was amazing! Chapter 9 FOR THE WIN!
Guest chapter 8 . 9/12/2016
Best ending for chapter 8! That last line was sharp!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/12/2016
Epic! "Sound-proof was was a bad idea." I busted out when Lightning thought that! I'm like: True dat! Amazing Fan-Fiction.
MadeInHere chapter 22 . 5/25/2016
Dead story is dead
Octo chapter 22 . 10/22/2015
Well... I wasn't prepared for that much...
Lightning, once again, makes my heart melt. But actually, she always does haha x)

I don't really know but your vision of Light is kinda... hm... dunno how to explain... but I like it ! Lightning (for me) were always this "strong" and stubborn woman. But I've always felt some pity for her... Like, she's sad, destroyed, but she don't show it... What kinda life is that ? Is that even a life ? Whatever, it's only my point of view xD

I LOOOOOOVE the way you write omg. Really, your fanfiction is ALL i've ever wanted in a story with Lightning and Serah. I can feel so much feelings (thanks captain obvious) and... whaaaaaaoo it's awesome. It was so... Sooooooooooooooooo sad. I've always wanted to read something that is soooooo emotional that it could make me cry (and actually, it's kinda hard) or laugh but with you, I was like :
"omg too much feelings, can't handle this, NEED TO STOP READING just few minutes (5 minutes later) OKAY let's go... (Read few lines) OMG NO CAN'T READ THIS (few minutes) OK. NOW. I'M. PREPARED. Reading this chapter : Challenge accepted. (read few lines) OMG NO I WASN'T PREPARED AT ALL".

... Don't deny me please... TTTT xD

BUT, Serah seems very odd x) Indeed, she loves Lightning but didn't she... over-react ? Well, without this "over-reaction" there would probably not have any story so... BUT STILL, I feel like you make Serah too childish, since, after all, she were raised by Light. And she is her only familly. Maybe, okay, she's juste eighteen but... I really feel like if she was only fifteen.

... I talk too much omg xD Hope I'm not bothering you... :')
Hope you'll update soon, i'll be checking every day (no, checking is NOT stalking) !

Love ya, please hurry up ! Ü

PS : sorry if my review is hard to understant, I'm french haha :')
Rakurai Densetsu chapter 22 . 6/20/2015
Hey, I have been reading your story for sometime and I have to say :3 love the tragey and how childish Serah was :D When I watched that scene which Snow proposed to Serah, I was like "the heck? She's gonna marry at the age of eighteen!? Lightning is NOT gonna be happy with this!" XD And I also wonder if there's gonna be anyone who gonna write about Serah's mistake and here you are XD So I hope you will update soon :3
PS: Btw, I'm also a Lightning fan XD XD XD XD
Airyln chapter 22 . 6/15/2015
Wow... Definitely have to fave this. You got the depth and all seriousness inside. Nice emotions and pains. Never thought it'll be Lebreau who'd smack Serah's mind. Nice speech hahahah. I can feel Lightning's pain... And oh how touching for her to still care for Serah after the things she did to her. Serah's such a brat, so was Snow, thay's why they matches. Lol. Never like those two.

Oh it's been a long time since your last update. Wildl there be more? Ate you even here still?
Lightning792 chapter 22 . 6/1/2015
This is one of the best fanfic I have seen and It would be AWESOME if you could update the story dont let this fic down it would be a shame if you do so PLEASE UPDATE SOON...The readers of this fic would be gratefull if you you do so,or some I guess...thanks if you are reading this:)
Guest chapter 22 . 1/15/2015
this story is great, i love it :D
i've been waiting for years to read the next chapter
could you please update this story?
thank you very much :)
Knight of Kanto chapter 22 . 6/16/2014
It's a shame when you find some of the best fanfics on this site abandoned. This was an excellent read and I wish that the writer could have finished this.
Guest chapter 22 . 6/11/2014
please do more!
this was amazing!
The way you captured their actions and thoughts and still keep their characters was astonishing!
Keeepsmiling chapter 22 . 3/18/2014
When are you gone update pleas update pretty pleaaaass update I wane know what's happening nextttttttt! Keeepsmiling :D
Galaxyspoon chapter 10 . 9/13/2013
"Light's pretty harsh, isn't she?"

Cause I know if my sis got married behind my back, I'd be all sunshine and rainbows, eh?

Sarcasm aside, I like the overall plot, but there are a few flaws.

- The characters are pretty OOC, sure, Serah would be upset if Lighting told her not to get married, but run away and get married without her? Not buying it. Seems kinda over doing it. Lighting's not as tough as she was in the game, ect.

- The grammar, the most bothersome thing is not capitalizing the I's.


""...I'm not your sister." Serah blinked. "...uhh...sis...i called you. Not Snow." Serah pointed at herself for emphasis."

It should be obvious that Serah said it, they're different genders, it's kinda hard to mix up their voices.
Tia chapter 13 . 8/4/2013
OMG too sad! I'm trying just as hard as Serah to stop crying the only difference between us is... its working for me!
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