Reviews for Your Angel
Tear of Light chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
I found this a really touching piece. You're writing is very clear and the emotions within it are well written. I really hope that Hope found this kind of closure in game about the death of his mother.

Well done!
Ephemeral Glimpse chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Beautifully orchestrated. A masterpiece indeed. Probably the best oneshot I have ever read in the site. :-)
Keyblade Master Timaeus chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I loved this little piece, the way you depicted Hope and Nora in this. You showed a very nice mother-son bonding few moments in this, how much Nora cares for her son and how much Hope cares for his mother. I imagined Nora would be like this the moment I saw her first scenes in the game. As for your statement bout not writing more FFXIII fics, I think you should, they,re pretty Damn good, awesome actually in my opinion. I was getting tears in my eyes readin this-SERIOUSLY. You should continue with writing them.
xxxCheesecakee chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
this was amazing! :D

i think you definitely portrayed hope's mom well. even thought she was only in a few scenes, this is exactly how i pictured her to be like
Chochoyummy chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Hi, I wanted to compliment you on your writing here! Initially,

I wasn't going to review this and leave it as it is, but you seemed a bit down in the dumps when I read your profile, so here

it is~!

Anyways, I thought you got the characterization spot on here. Even though Nora appears in like, 2-3 scenes in the game itself. I found myself charmed at the motherly compassion and the way she jokingly teased Hope yet at the same time managed to keep him in line. I also found Hope to be perfect too, his initial stupor at seeing his mom, but then managed to enjoy the moment before she left him with the little note. It really showed how much time he spent with her and how much he cared about his mother. I found there interactions to be pretty realistic, and was amused at what Hope's ideal paradise was.

The detail was clear cut, and I never found myself confused as

to what was happening at the time, their emotions were always

displayed in an easy to understand manner. I liked the way

you melded in this dream with the events of the real game, I felt like it could've fit in the game somewhere along the line!

Anyways, you shouldn't give up , even if you do feel a bit self-conscious. I might stick around a bit to read some more of

your stuff, if you update of course. Ciao~!
Sora-chan120 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
vVery cute I thought that it was very awesome
anon chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Wow. I was looking for a Hope & Nora fic and this one is awesome. Good job
Darkspyre chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Oh. Really liked this. Nice choice on the lyrics as well. :)
rawr chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
this is pretty cool!
HopeEstheim chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Rhoorz chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Wow, simply amazingg ) I almost cried reading this. You're ways of describing things are so vivid :3 I love how this helps with explaining how Hope got over his sadness too. AWESOME JOB!

I will miss your other story as well ( Maybe you will continue it someday but either way your writing is still awesome, I hope more people read this and give you great feedback for it :D
Lexicer chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Oh, I loved the ending! Very sweet. :]
crystal waves chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Hi Kittyphang! Err, I mean, PhantomGREEN! )

I love this story soo much. It made me kinda sad ;_;

I'm glad you decided to keep writing. When I saw your other story was discontinued I was sad but I think I understand your reasons for stopping since nobody was really leaving reviews ( hoping this story is a success!

Great work ))
Aoi Hyoudou chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
Poor Hope.