Reviews for Snowed in
floridapanther28 chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Hehe, great story :) The paragraphs are really huge, though, so it makes it harder to read. Maybe try making a lot of small paragraphs instead of making 15 really big ones; it would make it a lot easier! :D Looking forward to chapter 2, and I agree with Chelsea! I hate cliffhangers when you can't even read ahead! :\
GintsukiKyu chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Nice first chapter I'll be waiting for next one.
Kyoto-Hetalia chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
more more! D:
tiffany59 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Wow! This is good! I wonder who was at her door. I guess I have to wait and read. Update soon!
Winged Cherry chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
It's an interesting story plot, but I do think you're better off without the dialogues before and after the actual story.

It makes you seem less than the writer you really are.

Keep improving,