Reviews for Child of Mine
claraengels.1609 chapter 17 . 1/5
Hey, I’d like to say that I really like this story and would love to know how it goes on.
I would also really like to see some kind of romance developing between Severus and Remus. Idk when Remus was turned into a woman, Severus Kind of „flirted“ with him and I found that amusing and I mean even Harry ships them... so I thought maybe that would be a likeable way to continue with the story. Just something small. Doesn’t have to be much but that would make me really happy! Thank you!
AsherSalazar-Malfoy chapter 4 . 6/28/2020
someone should tell Snape that Babys have empathy-
waternixie101gmail.com chapter 17 . 5/25/2020
just found this and i absolutely love it, there was several places that i laughed so hard i had to walk away just to calm down so i could continue reading. i hope that you eventually finish this i would love to see how it ends
Guest chapter 17 . 4/10/2020
Hey this is really good. Keep up the good work! please update soon.
xTCatxx chapter 17 . 6/18/2019
Please please don't let them torture Harry please he's just a baby please
mariyah.ahsan chapter 17 . 5/12/2019
Jeez you forgot to update for 13 years.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/24/2019
Hello:
Idk if you're continuing to write your child of mine fanfic, but I must say: u r doing a fantastic job with the storyline and your writing in general. U r WAY better than I ever hope to beat writing but i do have a little idea for the next chapter if you're ok with me intervening. I think u should build on the idea of Harry being powerful. That big 'kitty' (in blank on his name, appologies) he stumbled across in the forbidden forest got a little picture of that power. But I think it'd be cool to write the story as if Harry has no idea that he's that powerful and have the dark lord be quite baffled by his power and have a bit of a difficult time controlling Harry but is able to do it in the end. U can also have some of the death eaters help control him. Such as bellatrix or Lucius. Idk if u want them to be a little bit soft towards Harry or not, but based on some of them other hp fanfics that I have previously read the story is better if u make the dark lord unloving and very cruel like he is in the books.
But I haven't figured out how Snape and the other good guys will figure out were Harry is.
Whatever u write, remember: in a book, ANYthing can happen.
I look forward to your next chapter and hope that this can be helpful to u.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2019
I LOVED the idea of the story! I was just thinking that maybe you could end the sentences in some places, because they end up getting too long. Also, maybe think bout correcting some grammar? I work for a publishing agency, and think there could be some more spirit. That’s all I have! Thank you for this delightful story.
moonprincess97524 chapter 17 . 2/10/2019
I love this wonderful wonderful story that you have written so far. I love how everyone explains to Harry about how things are for Snape and how he doesn't understand things and such. I really love that Harry was able to get Moony to change into a girl via prank and act like he didn't do it intentionaly. I look forward to more of this wonderful story as soon as you are able to update it.
ChrisUSA chapter 17 . 11/29/2018
Finish it pls
vrani140 chapter 17 . 11/9/2018
please, continue
mumphie chapter 17 . 10/7/2018
Really quite a cliffhanger! Twelve years have gone by, and you said that your wouldn't abandon this story. Perhaps looking for your muse behind the curtains? Itis an interesting take and flows well. Please consider coming back!
mumphie chapter 4 . 10/7/2018
ch. 4 - I think Molly would LOVE to take him!
tmntfanforever852 chapter 17 . 8/29/2018
Love the story only site that's allows to type emails are archive of our own and wattpad
TinkaPrime chapter 17 . 6/19/2018
It comes down to privacy issues and virus complaints when people email from links.
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