|Reviews for A Clean Break|
| kat1316 chapter 19 . 3/25/2013
noooo dont stop
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 19 . 2/11/2012
man what an interesting story i would love to read more please updates
| Emriel chapter 19 . 8/3/2011
i liked this... the only thing is... seph really doesnt need a paycheck *-* and mako production through cloud is interesting but... they don't need more money. .
some of the characters are ooc. if not most
BUT I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT. the whole story has a very dark theme *o*. and i feel like every chapter is filled with some sort of decay. or maybe it's the fact that i haven't eaten yet and i feel very hungry and reading about alcohol and drugs make me go wooozy.
owell. it'd be nice if you decide to update this story *o* weee
| viu chapter 19 . 4/9/2011
The story is interesting. Want to see what Reno will do.
| Mizu Hoseki chapter 19 . 4/8/2011
he killed the bunny?
-mourns the loss of the bunny-
-shakes a finger at him-
I agree with Reno... Take Cloud away from him!
-sits and glares daggers at him-
I'm helping Reno
| Epsilon16 chapter 19 . 4/8/2011
Is some parts left out in the chapter? Cos i was rather confused at the end until i realise that the bunny girl is killed by Sephiroth. It wasn't describe in the story and suddenly Tseng was in the story... I still like where this story is going and wonder what Sepiroth will do to Cloud in the next chapter... So now Reno will help Cloud and Tifa to get away...
| Kyu-Momo chapter 18 . 4/7/2011
Aww, this has been great so far! :)
And poor cloud!
Keep up the great work.
| Epsilon16 chapter 18 . 4/7/2011
Im glad u are still on the roll! Im so happy to see this story update daily. And now things seem to really build up.. I like the way you move the plot. Everything building up and then reno come in, make it funny at the end.. Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Dragi chapter 18 . 4/6/2011
rofl, cloud stealing reno's clothes.
gues reno got to teach cloud a bit about taking others clothes wonder how sephiroth is gona take the news when he is back from his mission. looking forward to read more :D
| Mizu Hoseki chapter 18 . 4/6/2011
you like my reviews?
thank you _ I have fun writing them
-see Hojo and hits him with a bat knocking him out again-
can it, your ruining my happy moment...
oh how I wonder what Sephiroth will respond when he finds his toy has started to figure things out
whiskey... wonder what affect that'll have on Cloud...
-dances around the room trodding on Hojo in the process-
I look forward to the new chapter with my enthusiasm _
| Epsilon16 chapter 17 . 4/6/2011
Im glad you are on the roll.. And hope it will continue on.. Interesting chapter with more things reveal.. I was right. it was a really big hint by the way..
| Mizu Hoseki chapter 17 . 4/5/2011
can we punch Hojo to death yet? please?
happy reunion _
but for how long will their time together be pleasant? makes one wonder, yes it does _
looking forward to the next chapter _
| Dragi chapter 17 . 4/5/2011
hmm, wonder how sephiroth will take cloud's questing him about him lieing
looking forward to read more :D
| Epsilon16 chapter 16 . 4/5/2011
im so glad that u update so fast... Is the black-hair girl Tifa? Reno is so funny in this...
| A Single Fragile Rose chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
Awwww, really cute and adorable! Dying to read more! Is this going to be a Sephiroth&Cloud pairing! They make such a cute couple...*dreamy sigh* (lol) Yet, again..another wonderful chappie by Shan! ]] xo