Reviews for A Clean Break
kat1316 chapter 19 . 3/25/2013
noooo dont stop
UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 19 . 2/11/2012
man what an interesting story i would love to read more please updates
Emriel chapter 19 . 8/3/2011
i liked this... the only thing is... seph really doesnt need a paycheck *-* and mako production through cloud is interesting but... they don't need more money. .

some of the characters are ooc. if not most

BUT I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT. the whole story has a very dark theme *o*. and i feel like every chapter is filled with some sort of decay. or maybe it's the fact that i haven't eaten yet and i feel very hungry and reading about alcohol and drugs make me go wooozy.

owell. it'd be nice if you decide to update this story *o* weee
viu chapter 19 . 4/9/2011
The story is interesting. Want to see what Reno will do.
Mizu Hoseki chapter 19 . 4/8/2011
he killed the bunny?

-mourns the loss of the bunny-

bad Sephiroth!

-shakes a finger at him-

I agree with Reno... Take Cloud away from him!

-sits and glares daggers at him-

I'm helping Reno

Epsilon16 chapter 19 . 4/8/2011
Is some parts left out in the chapter? Cos i was rather confused at the end until i realise that the bunny girl is killed by Sephiroth. It wasn't describe in the story and suddenly Tseng was in the story... I still like where this story is going and wonder what Sepiroth will do to Cloud in the next chapter... So now Reno will help Cloud and Tifa to get away...
Kyu-Momo chapter 18 . 4/7/2011
Aww, this has been great so far! :)

And poor cloud!

Keep up the great work.
Epsilon16 chapter 18 . 4/7/2011
Im glad u are still on the roll! Im so happy to see this story update daily. And now things seem to really build up.. I like the way you move the plot. Everything building up and then reno come in, make it funny at the end.. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Dragi chapter 18 . 4/6/2011
rofl, cloud stealing reno's clothes.

gues reno got to teach cloud a bit about taking others clothes wonder how sephiroth is gona take the news when he is back from his mission. looking forward to read more :D
Mizu Hoseki chapter 18 . 4/6/2011

you like my reviews?


thank you _ I have fun writing them

-see Hojo and hits him with a bat knocking him out again-

can it, your ruining my happy moment...

oh how I wonder what Sephiroth will respond when he finds his toy has started to figure things out

whiskey... wonder what affect that'll have on Cloud...

-dances around the room trodding on Hojo in the process-

I look forward to the new chapter with my enthusiasm _

Epsilon16 chapter 17 . 4/6/2011
Im glad you are on the roll.. And hope it will continue on.. Interesting chapter with more things reveal.. I was right. it was a really big hint by the way..
Mizu Hoseki chapter 17 . 4/5/2011
breeding them...

can we punch Hojo to death yet? please?


-coos softly-

happy reunion _

but for how long will their time together be pleasant? makes one wonder, yes it does _

-dances around-

looking forward to the next chapter _

Dragi chapter 17 . 4/5/2011
hmm, wonder how sephiroth will take cloud's questing him about him lieing

looking forward to
Epsilon16 chapter 16 . 4/5/2011
im so glad that u update so fast... Is the black-hair girl Tifa? Reno is so funny in this...
A Single Fragile Rose chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
Awwww, really cute and adorable! Dying to read more! Is this going to be a Sephiroth&Cloud pairing! They make such a cute couple...*dreamy sigh* (lol) Yet, again..another wonderful chappie by Shan! ]] xo
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