Reviews for Moonrise
Evil bad chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
Mickey: (sing) there it's no way...
why did you?
my big brother, need rest now.
you can and i alone...?
something to sleep?
the moon rise...
how bad evil cannot be?
you're going down, and i stupid?
no play with me (sad-face) along?
we need the love alone?
i like to frozen and my little pony alone.?
my ladies queen elsa and princess luna working together,
and so am iiiii?
i'll be quiet for oswald...
(door-open-close)
i once to meet sleeping?
i'll see the moon rise?
(evil-bad-eyes-darkness)
(close-my-eyes-open)
(mad-face)
i don't like it, i cannot to sleep with me?
show me to sleep right now?
(hold-blanket-down-bed-oswald)
nighty night brother...
i'm watching you?
say goodnight ozzie?
(hold-ray-power-dark-moonrise)
Oswald: (sleepy-talking) mick...?
(snoreing)
Mickey: (sing) oh shut up..?
bro, (evil-smlied)
i lies for you?
you'll never destroy by queen elsa and nightmare moon come alone?
will something for the ground...!
you still never to me?
you punched you're frozen bad with to weakened and colder even fight me alone!
but won't never didn't to with me?
(hold-ray-power-my-room-evil)
you'll well never believe with me please stay away or me!
cannot be love one again even happy for oswald alone?
i'm getting really mad?
evil bad?
evil bad?
how bad evil cannot be?
i turning me nightmare mouse?
we'll see the moon rise hold my dark moooooooooooooon!
let's transformed nightmare mouse begin!
(transformed-nightmare-mouse)
Nightmare-mouse: so long!
(laugheds)
loser all ways with me...
(close-my-door)
(no-sing)
(the-end...?)
roxy chapter 17 . 1/6/2016
I've seen ecplis probyly more that 39 times
Guest chapter 4 . 11/30/2015
Nice...
Blairx6661 chapter 22 . 8/13/2013
This was good, I enjoyed reading it :)
Jassy Anne Vicky chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
love this story. You are very talented.
Jasmine Anne Victoria
milinda268 chapter 17 . 5/25/2013
I LOVE TWILIGHT TOO! BUT LIKE YOU, I WANTED TO SEE IT! YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER AND I THINK THAT YOU SHOULD WRITE EVEN MORE STORIES! YOU ARE REALLY GOOD AT WRITING IN ALICE'S PERSPECTIVE AND I FELT LIKE THAT WAS ACTUALLY HER! GOOD JOB!
SINCERELY, ONE OF YOUR GREATEST FOLLOWERS,
MILINDA
P.S I READ AND WATCHED ECLIPSE ABOUT 37 DIFFERENT TIMES... MOSTLY READ THOUGH.. I LIKE THE BOOKS MORE THAN THE MOVIES!
Blairx6661 chapter 6 . 4/15/2013
Ugh I was supposed to stop reading after Chapter 4 but it's so hard to stop! Damn you xD I'm really liking this.

Just one question - I thought Jasper and Alice didn't get married until after they joined the family. Where did you get the idea thay they married before then? (Assuming I read your story right xD)
Blairx6661 chapter 4 . 4/15/2013
This story is pretty good so far. I'm having fun reading about these events from a different perspective as it's been a while since I've tried.

Some parts of this chaptet were a little hard to understand though. Whether that's due to Edward's internal conflict or your writing, I'm not sure.

Btw, there's one typo I wanted to draw your attention to. Where it says ** There is nothing to worry about" she said confidently.** - it should say 'I said confidently' as this story is being written from Alice's POV.

Good work so far :)

xxx
amandaav13 chapter 22 . 4/14/2013
this was a really good story! loved it.
Kimberly Dawes chapter 20 . 4/10/2013
Excellent story. Loving it!
Augvstus chapter 18 . 2/23/2013
TEAM EDWARD FOREVER :D
Augvstus chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
An OK chapter, I guess
Augvstus chapter 13 . 2/22/2013
:O OMG THE BLUE V-NECK FROM BREAKING DAWN OMG
Lee Kyle chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Interesting seeing these events from Alice's perspective. And thanks for staying in canon!
HelloIamGracie chapter 22 . 12/4/2012
I loved this story. You have a few typing errors, like when you get typing really fast and you might mix up a couple of letters or miss one, but other than that it was great! As for this link you have up here... I don't know what I am supposed to put it in to or anything. It didn't work. And I didn't find the link on your page either, I would really enjoy reading it so perhaps you could look into what's going on. Again, I really liked this story! Alice & Jasper are my favorite couple too!
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