Reviews for Moonrise
Blairx6661 chapter 22 . 8/13/2013
This was good, I enjoyed reading it :)
Jassy Anne Vicky chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
love this story. You are very talented.
Jasmine Anne Victoria
milinda268 chapter 17 . 5/25/2013
I LOVE TWILIGHT TOO! BUT LIKE YOU, I WANTED TO SEE IT! YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER AND I THINK THAT YOU SHOULD WRITE EVEN MORE STORIES! YOU ARE REALLY GOOD AT WRITING IN ALICE'S PERSPECTIVE AND I FELT LIKE THAT WAS ACTUALLY HER! GOOD JOB!
SINCERELY, ONE OF YOUR GREATEST FOLLOWERS,
MILINDA
P.S I READ AND WATCHED ECLIPSE ABOUT 37 DIFFERENT TIMES... MOSTLY READ THOUGH.. I LIKE THE BOOKS MORE THAN THE MOVIES!
Blairx6661 chapter 6 . 4/15/2013
Ugh I was supposed to stop reading after Chapter 4 but it's so hard to stop! Damn you xD I'm really liking this.

Just one question - I thought Jasper and Alice didn't get married until after they joined the family. Where did you get the idea thay they married before then? (Assuming I read your story right xD)
Blairx6661 chapter 4 . 4/15/2013
This story is pretty good so far. I'm having fun reading about these events from a different perspective as it's been a while since I've tried.

Some parts of this chaptet were a little hard to understand though. Whether that's due to Edward's internal conflict or your writing, I'm not sure.

Btw, there's one typo I wanted to draw your attention to. Where it says ** There is nothing to worry about" she said confidently.** - it should say 'I said confidently' as this story is being written from Alice's POV.

Good work so far :)

xxx
amandaav13 chapter 22 . 4/14/2013
this was a really good story! loved it.
Kimberly Dawes chapter 20 . 4/10/2013
Excellent story. Loving it!
DauntlessClove chapter 18 . 2/23/2013
TEAM EDWARD FOREVER :D
DauntlessClove chapter 16 . 2/23/2013
An OK chapter, I guess
DauntlessClove chapter 13 . 2/22/2013
:O OMG THE BLUE V-NECK FROM BREAKING DAWN OMG
Lee Kyle chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Interesting seeing these events from Alice's perspective. And thanks for staying in canon!
HelloIamGracie chapter 22 . 12/4/2012
I loved this story. You have a few typing errors, like when you get typing really fast and you might mix up a couple of letters or miss one, but other than that it was great! As for this link you have up here... I don't know what I am supposed to put it in to or anything. It didn't work. And I didn't find the link on your page either, I would really enjoy reading it so perhaps you could look into what's going on. Again, I really liked this story! Alice & Jasper are my favorite couple too!
Scubaaaaa chapter 4 . 9/16/2012
Best story
Scubaaaaa chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Awesome
accioeternity4 chapter 21 . 8/28/2012
I just loved this fanfiction, specially because it's filled with alisper moments, and I'm a big fangirl over them so... hahaha! This story is making me go through all of your other stories ;) You're a great writer, keep writing like this forever please! LOL
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