|Reviews for Grim Reaper|
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/23
I like your story so far. I just wanted to point out that it was very hippocritical of Harry to get mad at Ron for telling him not to be friends with Hermione and Neville and then immediately tell Draco he would only be friends with him if he got rid of Crabbe and Goyle. We know that Crabbe and Goyle were little more than goons, but Harry would not have known anything about them at this point.
| Gloriejo chapter 5 . 11/9
Is it bad that I feel bad for Dudley? Dudley was a bully yes, but he learned it from his father and never being reprehended by his mother. He however, in the books, learned after the dementor attack that what he was doing was wrong (might have been from whatever vision he had). Also in this chapter Vernon threatened to hurt his own son (why am I not surprised by that) and so Dudley would have very well turned into a more sympathetic person then, especially if this wasn't the first time. (Remember this is 6 years after Harry's death, there would have been past incidences as well.) As for Vernon and Petunia, they got what they deserved.
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/4
I don't quite understand the timeline here. You said in the last chapter that Harry was killed when he was 5, yet the 'punishment' happened quite soon afterwards. For Dudley to be in St Brutus' at age 11, there would have to to be a period of a few years between the murder of Harry and Dudley's murder of the younger boys.
| shadow chapter 4 . 2/5
Why Remus Lupin-BLACK, are Sirius and Remus married or something like that? bye the way best os death fanfic ever
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19
You need to write better.
Concerened? Why? For his Heath? For the man near him? Why? Better description would be nice.
| goodpie2 chapter 4 . 10/13/2014
Well fuck that shit. As badly written as it was, it was still kinda fun to read, but you just ruined it by putting Sirius and Lupin together.
| goodpie2 chapter 2 . 10/13/2014
Quite poorly written, especially the random tense changes, but it's an interesting concept, so I'm gonna try and put up with it.
| SuperVegitoFAN chapter 5 . 7/31/2014
since harry wasnt really dead anymore i wasnt sure the dursleys would be punished but HOLY SHIT MAN...
there isnt many stories around where the dursleys die and i do recall one (sadly a rather short one as it goes from pre hogwarts to end of first year but MANY changes) where petunia dies due to voldemort and snape, by saving dudley with (unwilling) assistance from lily... said assistance being the canon way harry survives voldemort in 81.
| Alie-yaoi chapter 15 . 7/6/2014
| jchangpa chapter 3 . 3/13/2014
Ok. At this point I have a couple of thing that i can said about the story. 1. For those who state that the grammar or spelling do not then read the story please hold your comment to yourself. Most of them are derogatory to the writer specially if he or she does not borned as an english speakers. 2. As I do not like slash stories or SS/HP/DM good relation for me the story is not good, but on this case the story is really good so please keep up your writing. Forget those spelling/grammar freaks, most of them do not even write correctly an email or chat but love to tell other that they write bad.
| Firestar-harry chapter 5 . 3/5/2014
hard core man hard core
| Arashi - IV of VI chapter 15 . 10/4/2013
This was amazing! :D
I loved it!
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/9/2013
To Wufei: isn't it technically the
End of the story to his death adventure of capturing horcrux?
| Mari Wollsch chapter 15 . 7/24/2013
| jfcwtfusernames chapter 5 . 5/7/2013
Your abuse of the English language has soured my enjoyment of this story.