|Reviews for The Denarian Variation|
| z-vo chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
I just have to say... WOW! I was extremely happy to see that you have revisited this world... I was sad when I got to the end of the last story after following your trilogy for so long. I thought this story was very well written and that you did a good job in describing the characters, how far they have come, and their motivations. Excellent work! Hope you revisit this world again.
| dreamhunter501 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
omfg... amazing i have read changes and i like this version more... it was so cool anyways i was overjoyed to find you had written this and hope you find inspiration to continue the series as it is truly one of the greatest works or literature iv ever read
| colin chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Dude that rocked. That is really all I cant say I am overjoyed that you came back and might have a fourth Denarian Book. I really look forward to it. The Red King was awesome and I have never read any of the Dresdin Files books but from your stuff I think I just might go get them if they are half as good as what you write. Update again soon.
| weixuan18 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Now this is impressive. I didn't expect a fourth one too. But things are getting heated up again. Great job. D
| Dragonist chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Alright! Daughter number two is up! The new book is great, and I'm so glad that you're writing this tribute. Denarians all the way!
| Numb soul chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
ok, first of all, that was so freaking awesome and satisfying that i don't even know where to begin! There were a few typos that messed up the flow a bit, but other than that, no complaints at all. I think my favorite scene was the Meciel's "Begone" scene, that was something we've never seen her do before. Albus Dumbledore is kind of awesome too.
Anyway, i hope you do decide to write a fourth story, but if not, i am looking forward to any of your other works!
| Cryostasis chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Wow. It's hard to imagine Harry and Amanda as actual adults, so I just imagine it's James Potter and Charity instead. The image actually works, at least as well as the story is written though. "Where are they now" immages always makes for great continuations, especially if it's an actual story instead of some short epilogue.
Such a pity, I always imagined Harry and Amanda getting together. Baby making non-withstanding, having them both be adult, single, and against each other simply feels somewhat OOC, so I hope you continue the story if for no other reason than to mitigate that.
Now I wonder what Hermoine/Ron are like as adults. Nice portrayal of Verrine by the way.
| Denarian chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
I found The Denarian Knight two years ago, and since then I've been addicted to your epic.
I was disappointed yet understanding when you said you were done with fanfiction, and I was extremely glad to see you lied.
I hope you keep this going, it was a pleasure to read as usual.
Tell us whenever you have a book published. I'll be sure to pick it up.
| SuperiorShortness chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Hope we see an update for this soon :P. Cliffhangers bah!
| hunny.kun chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
even trough the blatant rip-off (we were warned though) it was incredibly entertaining to read this, I've missed so much your Denarian Lord stories, and reading about Harry again made my day
I could've lived without the cliffie though, I almost had a stroke after reading the ending of Changes, wanted to shred Butcher to pieces :P
ps:also, just to be picky, The name is Chichén Itzá, not Chitzen Icha, and it encompasses the remains of a city, so calling it The Chitzen Icha it's doubly wrong :P
| Rome28 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
This was good but are you going to continue with it?
| justbin chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
super awesome.. man that was great.
| Renzo7 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Lucifer or Satan, perhaps?
Awesome work, as usual from you! Chapter was a great read. I hope your plot bunnies take you hostage and force you to get on that keyboard ASAP :P.
Thanks for the update, I hope you write more, soon.
| Pandora's Crate chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
I am BEYOND thrilled that you've continued the Denarian series. Can't wait to see more!
| DeathNoteMaker chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
That was kickass! XD Though I hope that Harry made it! Can't be letting the hero (anti-hero) dying now can we? Plus I want Harry to meet his other daughter! I want to see that meeting! XD
Man, we are going to have watch harry! Got all these baby mommas everywhere. XD