Reviews for The Denarian Variation
OBSERVER01 chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
pretty good
a darker path chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
please, i beg you, another denarian fic
Master Archive chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
i love it i hope you continue with this story i have many unanswered questions like who the hell is behind it all and what the flying fuck did he give Amaris for the army
Avallyn Fey chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
oh I hate you - just about as much as jim butcher for writing a wonderful story like this and then stoppingwith a cliffhanger like that. evil. really. "done" it says on your page. *sigh* still. good story, good thrilogy as a matter of fact. good job. If you ever do end up publishing something (I don't doubt that you will) - will you advertise it? I'd love to read more of your stuff...
dangerverse chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
awesome
Shedao chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
You know, I don't even remember why I stumbled across Renegade and decided to read it; I may have been looking for another one of your stories and decided on a whim to take a look, but either way I opened it up. The first thing I did was read your author's note suggesting I read the Dresden Files. Now up till this point, I'd never heard of Jim Butcher, but I figured if I was going to read your series then I'd better read the series it was based on. I can't thank you enough for steering me to what has become one of my favorite published authors.

As to your stories, I think that you display a gritty sense of self-possession (irony!) by Harry that certainly fits your story very well. I truly enjoyed your story and, while as a Christian I may find some of the expressed ideas offensive, that's part of the story and I understand that. I'm certainly up for more if you feel the need/desire to continue with your little Denarian Lord, especially as your endings suck. Resolution, as they say, is good for the soul. :)
dark zues chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
thanks dude for conti the story...

m such a huge fan of ur...

plz update as soon as possible...
Jay-F chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
wow... "Albus idly noted that she was wearing an ornate brooch" does it have an S on it?... well I for one really hope you write #4.

Thanks for writing,

Jay
what are you even saying chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Interesting take. I've been waiting to read this one until Changes came out in paperback, but I finally caved, bought it, and finished reading it a couple of hours ago. All things considered, this was an excellent alteration, although I have to say that Harry's stale joke selection remaining the same into his twenties is more than a little bit sad. Ah well, that's what happens when you become one of the most powerful beings in the world before you can legally drink. Stunts your mental growth.

I do hope to see this continued eventually, but I'm pleased that you'll only do so if that's where your muse takes you. I do hate the not knowing, though. What a pain in the ass.

Looking forward to more.
wrefsd chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Pl0x Continue.
DaarkLord chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
I'm so glad this series isn't done.
Fez8745 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Oh what the fuck kind of ending is that! There was a warning for a Cliffhanger, But GOD! SUCH A CLIFFY! Amazing story, i was amazed with it, Like all the Denarian series, There has to be another one! We have too know who it is! But anyway, Amazing Story. Keep up the brilliant work.
Jaysues chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Excellent as always, I really do hope you continue the series :). There's just too much left to cover to end it with Lord :P.
smaiyur chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Hi.

I have just finished reading all your Denarian series, and I'm quite intrigued as to how you will either end the series or continue it. Also, I am interested in knowing as to how you came about with the Order of the Blackened Denarius. If it should be some novel, I would like to be notified about it, as it seems pretty interesting. Also, I would like to know more about the Dresden Files. If you could point me in the right direction, I would be grateful.

Thank You.

SPM
knuckz chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
I'm guessing it's that guy from the second task in Denarian Renegade. The one that enthralled the merfolk. Anyway, despite what your profile says about no more fanfiction, I hope you have one more conclusion that doesn't leave us hanging like that.
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