Reviews for Last Wish
cluelessinlife129 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
before i comment: is this exb HEA? i mean when you talk about canon and non-canon, exb stays canon right?

sorry, just uncomfortable with non canon stories : but if this is one,good luck- i think you'll do a good job.
kdillin chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Oh That was getting pretty good! Thanks for sharing this story and I absolutely can't wait to read more! I wonder if they are going to try the positions later on when they realize they are in love with each other! Jake is a dick and Mike is boring so that just leaves good ol Edward ;-)
Scarlett72 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Oh! I already feel like these characters are old friends. One hell of start for what I am sure will become a new favorite story. Can't wait for more!
coryoplayer chapter 1 . 4/8/2010

I need to know what was on page 4! NOW! (hee, hee)

Ok, another story to add to my list of reading material!

Looking forward to where your muse takes us readers!

teambellaedward chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
That was a great first chapter :)
PhantomsAngel1988 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
love it next chapter this gonna be an Edward/Bella fanfic?
Blood And Fangs27 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
i loved it!

what was on page 4?

update soon please!
kuntrygal chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Can't wait to see where you go with this!
Libby Blue chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Great start! I am super excited to see how everything is going to play out. I think the premise is wonderful and there is so much of a back-story for us to discover along the way!
ecxe chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
i'm guessing this ends up b/e since its labeled as such.

i have no idea whats going to happen in this story, and she gets with jake and mike newton. this is going to be one fun ride lol.
shar76 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
great chapter. can't wait for more
Lexie2516 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Like the story so far. Eager to read more!
countrygirl2319 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
great start can't wait to see the rest.
kismit1496 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
should be an interesting journey! Can't wait to see where it will go!
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