|Reviews for Last Wish|
| ajendas chapter 12 . 9/19/2010
Ross is probably the closest name you can get to Rose but Whit is really weird. Your story...
| ajendas chapter 11 . 9/19/2010
I love the fact that you made Mike the nice guy in this story as compared to many I have read in the past where Bella is married to him and he is an asshole, in the kindest term I can think of. But married 3 times is a bit too much. How old is she supposed to be? It is really a lovely story. Are your personal stories also Twilight based? Becca sounds a lot like Bella...lol
| Bellamora chapter 12 . 9/5/2010
This was a wonderful story! I sat down and read it all at once. I could not stop. :O) I though it wonderfully balanced. You have angst, romance, fully fleshed out & complex characters and a thoughtful plot. You have a great witing style and I look forward to reading much more of your stuff.
thanks for sharing.
| dani7603 chapter 12 . 9/4/2010
aww they had a lil boy so cute
| PhantomsAngel1988 chapter 12 . 8/29/2010
| Sunsetwing chapter 12 . 8/25/2010
So sad that it's over, but loved how you wrapped it up.
| Sunsetwing chapter 11 . 8/25/2010
So glad it finally came out. I'm surprised that Edward was able to be held back when Jake proposed.
| Veronique24 chapter 12 . 8/23/2010
Thank you for a beautiful story!
| rmcrms5 chapter 12 . 8/22/2010
Very sweet and beautiful ending
| MissRe chapter 12 . 8/20/2010
Awwww... it was a great ending to a wonderful story. I'm glad that they are doing so well. Love the new baby and the name. Love that Bella is acting and enjoying as well as her writing. Glad that Jake and Seth were there to kiss and make up. Thanks for taking us on a wonderful ride!
| asf134 chapter 12 . 8/19/2010
AW! cute... and thank god jake got it through his thick head
| asf134 chapter 11 . 8/19/2010
ew... fu*ck off jake
| Meyer-Madness chapter 7 . 8/19/2010
Being busted in the pantry was funny. I liked hearing Rose's POV. The date was cute. Jessie being totally cool with Bella and Edward hugging and kissing and knowing that Uncle Jake wouldn't like it was priceless. Who says kids dont have a clue? Great chapter!
| Meyer-Madness chapter 6 . 8/19/2010
Well Jake can be a little annoying and after his appearance I was afraid the night was going to go in a different direction. I am glad Rose and Alice r n on things and were able to keep Edward the peep talk and reassurance that he needed b4 he jumped to conclusions. The little getaway was real cute but I still wonder how long they can keep ppl oblivious of what they r doing. It's cute how Bella tries to play it calm and cool but like Edward says: her body betrays her, lol. The 'I Never' game was hilarious, I always love the types of crazy statements and stories that come out of fanfics that play that game. I wonder how long Bella and Edward will be able to hold off... time will tell
| Meyer-Madness chapter 5 . 8/19/2010
The skate date was awesome and its good that he does have the kids on his side. It was a little heartbreaking when Jessie called Daddy and disappointed that it was Edward. The mistletoe kiss was a great touch. Its funny seeing Rose and Edward as allies since they r usually enemies but I love that Rose is a straight shooter, she is honest and no-nonsense. Edward and Bella have definitely made it clear how they feel about each other. The whole skype concept and dating undercover is cute but I do worry how Angela will feel about it when she does find out. Great chapter!