Reviews for Broken Moonlight
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 28 . 8/18
It is about time Edward got his head ripped from his shoulders. I hate that I don't know what happens next and I cannot read to find out. Please, I beg of you, fix this for me.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 26 . 8/18
Woohoo they did the deed and it was good. They've conversed with the Wolves, who are asses. I think I am only sad because it is so close to being the end of what you have written so far. You can make me happy by adding on to it.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 25 . 8/18
I admit I laughed out loud at the ever heard of a telephone line. Well written chapter. Though hat about their human hunting ways? Wouldn't the wolves have issue with that?
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 24 . 8/18
I am excited for Bella and Jasper, her being almost ready is huge. Your pace is quite nice. I love your writing, please think about how wonderful your contributions are and think about writing more. I love you, my pocket writer.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 23 . 8/18
Yay they are staying with Bella! I cannot wait for more. I hope you write more soon. Please. Pretty pretty please.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 22 . 8/18
Such an awesome idea on the tattoo. I must say that your writing stays consistantly good. I am glad Bella got her tattoo now rather then in Seattle.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 21 . 8/17
I want to get acquainted with the General. Lucky Bella. Another one to add to your roster. Great job. Please for my sanity write more.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 20 . 8/17
Sure he could cut in...pieces! Yeah he should be cut in many pieces. Or ripped. Good chapter. I really enjoyed the interplay between Bella and Jasper. I should probably tell you that your story is worth being reread, as I am proving, and worth recommending. If you update it would be even more amazing then it already is.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 19 . 8/17
LOL. Yeah Southern Stallion does sound like a porn name. I love your author blurbs, so funny this time. You wrote a very steamy scene, and wrote it well. You have no grammar of spelling errors to detract. The flow of the story is just wonderful.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 18 . 8/17
yeah I can see how that event would be triggered by Fuckwards approach. i wonder why Rose isn't more sympathetic since she knows what its like to be violated. Anyway well written chapter.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 17 . 8/17
Oh Bella you intuitive shield you. I am so happy to read another good chapter. I am sad because I am coming closer and closer to where you stopped. Please don't make me cry from sadness.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 16 . 8/17
This is getting super exciting! Come my pretty and write for me.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 14 . 8/17
Poor Bella. That quick death was too merciful. Ah but I understand Bella was the highest priority. Poor Peter and Charlotte they felt so helpless. I wanted to cry. That just goes to show that you get your readers emotionally invested, which is a writers goal. My goal is to encourage you to write on this story again.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 13 . 8/17
I love DRAMA! I love Jasper and Bella, especially in this story! It really is well written and exciting. I cannot help but hope for more.
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 12 . 8/17
I seriously doubt Jasper will thank Rose. in fact I can see him being massively P-O-ed. I would like to tell you your story is amazing. So I will. Your story is amazing. I can only hope my reviews and naggings have inspired and encouraged you to come back to this story.
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