|Reviews for Postcards|
| Ariel-Scarlett chapter 1 . 1/12
I've read this many many times over the years and it's still one of my favorite stories. Love this. Very true to B & J's characters, funny, smart road trip/growing up story. You have such a talent! These are a some of my favorite sentences:
"It's all different now, and finally, she's ready for it."
"After all that they've been through and told and felt and done, it's when he hands her the coffee that she finally says she loves him. And she means it."
Also loved the postcards.
Thank you for this!
| TheOtterKnight chapter 1 . 1/10
Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh my god. I was brought here by Wide open road and I wasn't disappointed but I wasn't prepared for this. This is beautiful. The way you write is beautiful and it all meshes together and it's just ... I can't describe it. I love, love the tentative feeling from Jacob in the beginning, how afraid and concerned he is and Bella who just wants to get away. This is overwhelmingly haunting. I wish I could forget that I ever read this so I could read it over and over again. I don't know why, but Bella insisting that they go back really resonated with me. The roadtrip finally got to her and she just .. I don't know, looking back this kind of seems like a growing up fic or a coming of age thing. The roadtrip wizened her, wizened him too, and you did it so beautifully. You ended it wonderfully, too. Charlie and Bella's interaction was nice and sweet and I just want to evelope myself in this story, it's just so good. Thank you so, so much for sharing this with us.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
Amazing story! I didn't want it to end there!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2016
| Amanthya chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
THIS is the road trip-au I've been wanting. Except I wish it was longer. Please add more - and more and more and more and...
| sarahmicaela88 chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
Awww come on why not continue with it?
| jane chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
honestly the best twilight fic ever
like i hate hate hate first pov
and everything is so in character like it could have been canon
and its amazing
| Calyptra chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
That was a pretty awesome one-shot. I liked the writing style, it was different and really enjoyable. It felt more like reading a book instead of fan fiction. The short sentences used to describe situations as well as the almost one-word dialogues gave this story a unique touch. Random facts twisted with important information gave the feeling that they were living in the moment.
I liked that you had Charlie be so supportive. He has always been my favorite human and you just showed that he might be silent but not dumb or not caring.
It was good that you didn't have them jump each others bones but let it play out. Them comforting each other, getting through everyday, him fighting to stay with her because she asked him made the progress realistic. She made a sacrifice for him by taking him away and she spent time with him and fell in love with him by doing so. Much more realistic than the whole Edward fiasco.
I liked the little details, like the dialogue with Charlie, or what little things they found out about each other during their journey or how he said "I wish" while reading about the report his father wanted to file. It lightened the desperate situation.
What I really enjoyed that Jacob might had to suffer in this story like in nearly every other but he got her in the end without doubt, without competition and without feeling second best. Him being willing to stay away for ever just to be with her was touching. Her wanting to go back because he needed it was even better. It was a really heartfelt and still passionate dialogue.
I think that was my favorite Jacob/Bella one-shot so far or at least the best that I've read in a while.
Thank you for sharing!
| alh1971 chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
Loved it-every word...
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
This ... was ... UH-MAZIN ! I fell in love a little to quick , but hey . shit happens
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
Just like Bella's post cards to Charlie, you fit so much meaning into such a short script. It's not often you read a fic and say to yourself "I kind of wish this is how the original had gone!" Less is more! On with the fic's Audrey.
| Nic chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
Incredible. Simple yet so complex. Beautifully written. Thank you.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2015
Well. I am simply stunned. A twilight fic where Jake and Bella make it AND the author has managed to capture the essence of the characters. Has found a way to bring them together in a way that works in the context of twilight. Anyone can make Bella ...undamaged or Jake a weakling who will take any and all abuse. Very few manage to do what you have done One of the best short form twilight fics out there.
| thestudyof-ares chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
Thank you so much for this perfection ;_;
| anon chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
This. was. awesome.