Reviews for A Dragon's Breath
Annieyay123 chapter 4 . 4/18
Nice!i think that i could read so much more! You are really creative!
me chapter 6 . 1/23
snoutluot should be beaten up by hiccup!
TOOTHLESS1221 chapter 6 . 1/4
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT KILL A TURTLE! IT WOULD MAKE ME CRY AND SINCE I WAS CRYING I COULDNT READ YOUR STORY BUT IM REALLY INTO IT! JUST DONT KILL THE TURTLE!
Azalea M Calycay chapter 2 . 8/31/2015
this is a pretty good chapter.I have to bad not bad
Stripesicles222 chapter 10 . 8/11/2015
If the volcano is like Moria, does that make the Wind Fury the Balrog?
Stripesicles222 chapter 9 . 8/11/2015
Were you aiming for Moria? You mentioned in your notebat the end, but I pictured Moria through the skeletons, but mostly the guard book. In case you can't tell, I am a huge LotR fan. that reference just made this awesome story even awesomer!
Guest chapter 8 . 7/19/2015
Good chapter , just try to keep it more HTTYD times plz cx, and a bit more lemon with the Otp
Guest chapter 7 . 7/19/2015
Loved it ! We want more
Guest chapter 5 . 7/19/2015
We kinda want some M stuff for hiccup and astred, good story
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
love it
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
You r spelling berk wrong u think beck but it's not its berk
Maraduersforever chapter 18 . 3/20/2015
Like it
Swapyppup7557 chapter 11 . 3/2/2015
Love the story so far but snotlouts dragon is hookfang and fishlegs is meatlug and Ruff andTuffs are barf and belch and astrids dragon is stormfly
Guest chapter 2 . 2/22/2015
You spelt Berk wrong you went Beck
Swapyppup7557 chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
Wasn't bad the guy's name is gobber not gabber and its berk not beck and you mixed the movie with the book because the queen dragon is only called the red death not the sea dragon but I am interested in reading the next 17 pages
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