|Reviews for Dragon Age: Jack Effect|
| Reineserpent chapter 9 . 7/28
I'm not very fond of an idea of indoctrination, but
That Was Awesome!
I just hope Jack won't eventually irreversibly succumb to high dragon's blood like she did in the enemy camp against the Templars. And, omg, she actually beheaded Duncan! :O And Leliana! I wonder how she managed to not swallow the wine with blood mix when she undertook the ritual. Will she be the one to stick dagger between Jack's ribs when the time comes or will she convert in truth? Oh! And Alistair! Wonder if he'll be a part of the story once more or if that was the last we've seen of him.
And Morrigan's task! Is she to spirit the Grey Wardens away from the battle?
So many questions...
Whether this story continues or not, thank you for writing it! It was novel and I enjoyed it immensely.
| JensenDaniels32 chapter 1 . 4/5
Actually, I'm pretty sure that a good bullet to the skull would be more than enough to put down a dragon, as well as a drake. The armored scales of a dragon and/or drake aren't strong enough to protect them from something like that.
| moosejuice5 chapter 9 . 12/16/2015
This is genially amazing, I hope you add to this sometime
| Mr. Cloak chapter 9 . 4/16/2015
A unique premise, amusing dialogue, and well-written charicters?
I love it!
Any chance this story will be continued? It has so much promise, and I would hate to see it go to waste.
| EternityDragon2610 chapter 4 . 3/16/2015
'Can't build up a lame and cliche harem of brainless bimbos'
Course you can, and just imagine the kind of tortures jack could inflict on them. Her being the vindictive person she is would make quite the horror in the bedroom.
| Wolfman217 chapter 9 . 10/8/2014
Shame this was abandoned :(
| Wolfman217 chapter 4 . 10/7/2014
Fuckin' Dragon Hybrid Jack...oh my frickin' god thats awesome. :D
| Lord Asmodeus chapter 3 . 6/24/2014
This is good but I must question...
The whole debacle of morality is disconcerting...
Morality is a abstract concept?
So what if children perish? So what if you kill or rape a pregnant lady?
Indoctrination is common - look around you...patriotism...liberalism the labels we hold inby are our personal result of indoctrination...
Why else would everyone conform to singular spectrum of morality? Of what is good and bad...
There is no good or evil, only power, and those strong enough to wield it...
Simple - Conflict is eternal, as is its progeny war; As long as there is sentience and emotions conflict shall persist.
| SpecH82 chapter 9 . 6/7/2014
Long time since an update on this story was maid! :(
| SpecH82 chapter 5 . 6/7/2014
She killed Duncan... holy fuck, did not see that coming :)
| SpecH82 chapter 4 . 6/6/2014
Hell yes! :)
| SpecH82 chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
Don't make jack a grey warden, that would suck balls!
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/12/2014
Really hope you continue this at some point it was great to read
| SixPerfections chapter 9 . 7/30/2013
This was pretty bad ass. Jack being big and bad and taking over Thedas... hahah love it. I'm real sad this story isnt completed. Totally was into it. Hope you pick it up sometime. :)
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/10/2013
Will you add any more?