Reviews for Private Moment
Ms.K216 chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Very cute, I liked how it had no dialouge, but managed to say a lot.
O.o chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Lovely story!
candyluvsu chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Such a cute story I love their relationship. Awesome story. please write more and please make them longer.
XxScissorLuvxX chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
englishGirl042 chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
a great pointless little one-shot!

i already guessed that alice has a secret drawing talent...)

amazing idea
ThatOneQuirkyFangirl chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Crismebella chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
I liked it. I really like these "pointless" you say glances into the Twilight people. Especially when they are done well, like yours.
Dr.A.Robbins chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Gosh that was adorable. I live for fluffy Jalice one-shots ;)
deleteteled chapter 1 . 4/21/2010

its like they're reading each other's minds

i love it
MiQuerida 8142 chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
aw I always love reading your stories on Alice and Jasper, they are so sweet. These stories actually show true emotions and I really think that you do a great job writing them. Good work!
Realynn8 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Really really lovely!
ilikeverything2011 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Like it!, :)
Avalie chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
This is one of the most beautiful, sweet little fanfics I have read! I love all you writings; they are so cute! I check every day to see if you have added a new story, so please update soon! No matter how short or long it is, I love all your stories.
Ellie Marsy chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Aww, I think it was far from pointless. These kinds of one-shots are where you show Alice and Jasper at their best. It managed to be romantic and sweet yet not cheesy. Good job. :)
Li-Li-ThePinkbookgirl chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
I LOVED this story! It was sweet and awesome and cute and romantic and awesome and cool and did I mention awesome? :) Keep up the amazing work, and upload more stories soon!

Li Li
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