Reviews for Changed In A Heartbeat
avery674674 chapter 1 . 3/20
Good start so far this sounds like a really good fanfic.
andrewpine chapter 20 . 11/3/2016
Really the God of War taken down by a new were Peter and Char at for this fight?
andrewpine chapter 19 . 11/3/2016
Unless the sequel were rated M it would be a waste to write it in my opinion.
andrewpine chapter 18 . 11/3/2016
It just seems like you have forgotten that she is a sponge and has absorbed many gifts so he should have been put down within seconds of her seeing your writing gets better in the future if you keep at she should have Jane's powers and should have used them on.
andrewpine chapter 17 . 11/3/2016
Still don't have a clue why Bree was even involved with this stunt unless you just wanted to put her in the story for shits and grins. now lets go kill a couple of squirrel munchers K.
andrewpine chapter 16 . 11/3/2016
As much as Hermione hated Draco i cannot see them being paired together,sorry.
What will happen to Emmett now? i am guessing Alice can't see shit so they will not know a rescue party is on the way. will Bree survive this adventure or will she also go up in smoke? also why is she doing this,does she have the hots for Demetri or is she a Romanian plant?
andrewpine chapter 15 . 11/3/2016
Eddie and maybe Alice should wish they had jumped into a volcano instead of pissing her off, since it is rated T i doubt much will happen to either of a shame.
andrewpine chapter 14 . 11/3/2016
Hopefully she will have great pleasure in ripping apart Eddie and burning the parts. i thought at first Bree had the ability to plant suggestions into peoples minds,so if not just what was the conversation she had with Bella about?
andrewpine chapter 13 . 11/3/2016
andrewpine chapter 12 . 11/3/2016
Okay? Lets see where this goes now.
andrewpine chapter 11 . 11/3/2016
To repeat myself i want Demetri to kill the idiot and free Bella from her past.
andrewpine chapter 10 . 11/3/2016
About time they got are mates so why are you dragging their relation out so much?they should have been together soon after she woke up. let me guess Eddie will finally show up in front of the kings and i guess the ones that crash the meeting are Alice and Emmett? or is it Bella and her future lover and mate?
andrewpine chapter 9 . 11/3/2016
Have no idea what daggier means ,but i really would like to see Bella get together with her man Demetri and him kill Eddie when he shows up to die.
andrewpine chapter 8 . 11/3/2016
I guess Jane will be friendlier to Bella now? why hasn't she absorbed other gifts yet?
So is little Eddie on his way to ask for death now? can't wait until he sees Skye/Bella. are you going to have her and Demetri getting closer soon since they are mates?
andrewpine chapter 7 . 11/3/2016
Bella and Demetri soon become a mated pair and when little Eddie shows up to die Demetri kills and burns Bella is a sponge should she not have already absorbed Demetri,Aro,Alec,Jane and Heidi's gifts?
when the squirrel munchers show up will she get Eddie,Alice's and Jasper's gifts also?
So what happens with Jane?don't tell me she finds her mate in Eddie.
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