Reviews for Life in Technicolor
eviiz chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Seem very interesting! I really want to read the next chap!
Cullenosopy chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Alrighty then, get on with it!
forgotten22 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Hmm This is really interesting.

Can't wait to see what these fantasy parts tot he story are :)

I'm looking forward to more :)

Great job!
theorange3 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
I'm so excited this sounds wonderful.
GreenYellowJello chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
it seems like a very interesting story.

just one or two suggestions for latin-wise.

addo is kind of a weird word to say "bring".

fero is much more common and is kind of in the same sense.

and what did you mean by mei?
kakashifan-0001 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Interesting story, I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon.
jennayg123 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Such an exciting story! Can't wait to read more!
MarissaM1 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Intersting story, look forward to reading more.
dail-of-the-air chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
There are some issues with unnecessary commas and such, but nothing major. Great job going un-beta'd, you can hardly tell the difference between this and the beta'd.

Would umbra be referring to the shadow? Because then the Techincolor part of the title would make sense.

A good, strong start to a story. You've created mystery and set the scene for what looks to be quite the sci-fi story.

One suggestion: your fanfics usually use just the names of the Twilight characters, rather than the world or the characters, enough to the point where you could pass it off as your own. Maybe you should think about joining fictionpress or getting published by changing the character names. You've got a lot of imagination and original plotline.
LR51 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Burntcore chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Love the new story... can't wait to see where you take this!
Dawnriki chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
I'm so excited for this. You've definitely captured my interest.
Puplet chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Sound interesting. Can't wait to read it!

Is it inspired from Romanian mythology? "Umbra" means Shadow in Romanian!
Scarlett72 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
This is extremely strange and yet it captured me. I have absolutely no idea what this could possibly be about, but I want to. I will certainly be along for this journey. Will you have a posting schedule?
NKubie chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Intriguing so far.
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