|Reviews for What If|
| soulfert chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
I think you should finish this.! It would be great, but if not then it was good to read.
| Mystery Girl chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
I loved the story a lot. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| nacho5 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
| Country-Girl20 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
all i can say in one word "MORE! Titan A.E was my favorite animated movie ever and even though korso is a cartoon but i always thought he was hot. please let there be more so i can imagine a few changes in the the story from the movie
| sonicfighter21354 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Brilliant start. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
i loved it! can't wait for more!
| winsome.wasp chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Ah so far so good! I'm terrible with revies, but you should definitely continue this, maybe some Danielle/Korso in there?
| Tri-Canine chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Awesome. Write more. There doesn't seem to be any grammar or spelling errors. I guess just work a tiny bit on dialogue in later chapters. Don't stay dormant for too ling!
| inudigifan201 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
keep going! i love it!
| shelter chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
As a prologue, this chapter doesn't really do its job: I don't know anything about Danielle, and you've condensed a very tense scene into overlapping lines to dialogue. On the other hand, I take it that you're focusing on family tragedy over the greater chaos of Earth's destruction, and hope that (just like the movie), the characters get better depth & exploration after the opening scenes.
Whether or not Korso would have a 22 year old daughter doesn't really matter. What matters is you make Danielle's role believable. Up to now, you've done quite a good job.
One more thing (and no offence intended): But if you're going to demand reviews from your readers before you update then you're in the wrong fandom. It's been 10 years since Titan A.E came out & a majority of writers have stopped updating/ creating new things. Write for the sake of it. And as for me, as long as you keep the story going, I'll try my best to give feedback.
| Skull Nerd chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
The writing isn't all that bad :D
And I am curious as to what happens next XD
| whiteKnight15 chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Love it! Please add more soon! Its really good so far.
| Specter06 chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Wow, I can't believe that someone actually started to write another Titan A.E. story.
The fact that you've started working on one is already a great and very pleasant surprise to me.
I like you idea and I'm curious to see how it works out. I'm gonna follow it.
I hope that a few people out on the web are still interested and willing to read more Titan A.E. fanfiction because I too have more planned.
From what I can tell you're a good writer but your spelling needs a little tweaking. (I know, my spelling isn't really okay either but I'm a Dutch guy.)
But don't let my review discourage you. Keep it going.
| Arianna Mitoko chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
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