Reviews for Momente
halfboy chapter 3 . 1/10/2011
halfboy chapter 2 . 1/9/2011
Despite what was suggested in my last review, I have acctually read it all already, but I like reviewing individual chapter. I really love your writing style, and how fantastically the characters are written. Everything about this is wonderful!
halfboy chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Bloody hell. This was fantastic! Must. Read. More.
lilypad1 chapter 3 . 4/12/2010
OMG! so subtly provocative that it tickles the imagination...Absolutely brilliant...and just when I think you've written your best fiction you go a notch higher...You are a wonderful, wonderful writer...Waiting anxiously for your next update... :)
lilypad1 chapter 2 . 4/12/2010
Have already reviewed on LJ but this was so utterly Delightful, Fantastic, Funny and Cute...that have to do it again on FF. Cracked up giggling at Harry's :

*Little do they know that I've been there too*.. Leo's priceless reaction and Janet's subtle amusement...:)

Loved the way you have captured Nikki's carefree, teasing side..Her conversation in the morgue with Harry was utterly brilliant...My favorite bit was:

You obviously didn't get the full Cunningham experience...Haa! Haa!Gorgeous, Gorgeous...;)
sdfgdg chapter 3 . 4/12/2010
No! I need more, I need the next bit. I need it right now. This is so good, so unbeleivably perfectly sexy. Please post the next bit soon. I will worship you forever - I prmose! x
sdfgdg chapter 2 . 4/12/2010
Wow I love this! I think that somethi ng like this should defintely happen in the show - Leo's reaction was just priceless and Janet's amusement, utterly brilliant. I can jst imagine Leo's high pitched voice now hm - do you think the script team could be persuaded?

Gotta love it x
Silver-Ashes chapter 3 . 4/10/2010
Argh - the utter fabulousness of this story is not able to be put into words adequately! The UST is just perfect - how I just love these two.
Silver-Ashes chapter 2 . 4/10/2010
Just fabulous - how I wish this is what really had happened! Can't wait for the next installment :)
lilypad1 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Simply beautiful.. Wished it went on and on...Just love it but lol! really, it needs a sequel...