Reviews for Love Will Change a Man
BookQ36 chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
Nice fix-it. The concept of true love was foreign to the Romans, and although I love the Princess Bride (who doesn't?) it didn't seem to fit here. Otherwise, an excellent story. I've always wanted him to grab her and stop her from falling, so yay for that!
RubberKidney chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
Thank you.
Dan Sickles chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Great job! I was so sorry when Niobe died and I love the way you changed the scene. I just posted a ROME story of my own about changing that day's events also - hope you come over and take a look!
Kakyuu Kinmoku chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
i was realy schocked when niobe died because it was so calm and everything... she was just gone. I hated that scene altough I did not like her very well because of her betrayal. Strange thoughts, hu? :D
jrhull chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Well done. Very well written. I think you really captured Vorenus. And I liked the "stinking bodies of hard-working Romans..." No one thinks about smell when they think of Rome, but it must have smelled terrible (by today's standards).