|Reviews for Awakening|
| aradiaeva chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Amazing fic...loved the depth you brought to their relationship. Greay job and beautifully written.
| chirlagirl chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Great story! Loved everything about it! You writing more?
| Ravenous Raven chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Wow, this was a really good fanfiction for such an exciting (if cliched) movie! I like how you build up their relationship instead of jumping just to smut, it makes their interactions much more realistic.
I also enjoyed the bits of politics, fighting, and moments between Viktor and Sonja. I think it creates a good prologue and build up for the beginning of the actual movie.
Sonja's development was also quite good. Her eventually more compassionate view of the Lycans and humans stemming from her amused tolerance made sense.
| Finxsaholic chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Good God! this story was awessssoommmeeee! i dont know how you did it but my god, it blew me away. everything was so intense, as it should be!jeje. I mean in one freakinn chapter you dileverd all that! Execellent work, good use of grammar and adjectives , I like how you describe a scene or clothing, without over doing it. the only "but" here would be that sometimes I didnt quiet understand if someone was thinking this or if it was the other person a bit confusing there, but hey other than that like I said totally awesome! definetly gonna keep an eye on your stories. Just one minor question Your a Guy, right? I dont know why I think that, maybe its the way u write, but if your not Im totally sorry! I guess its the way describe a scene, its so realistic, oh just added to your bonus list of thing u can do!jajaja And now I think Ill go and buy this movie!
| AberrantMuse chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Love, love, love! Fantastic writing, and I think you captured Lucian and Sonja perfectly. I love their characters so much, and the eventual tragedy of their story is heart-wrenching...but this is the perfect prequel to all of that. Well done.
Also, have to agree with your little ran in your AN about Lucian getting bumped off by Kraven. While it makes sense, it's still such a WTF? moment. Lucian deserved a better death than that!
| hpsailorstarluver chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Wow! this was FANTASTIC! I loved it!
It literally broke my heart when she said "Good dog."
The dialog was fantastic! It sounded exactly like how they speak! Really wonderful job!
| Janeway78 chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
I thought it was wonderful.
They never had the beginning in the movie andyou did it perfectly!
| FanfictionFan360 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
absolutely fantastic you captured lucian and sonja perfectly, i have to admire lucians patience because if i was a lycan and a vampire called me a dog id rip their head off
| Mister Creepy chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
This was a very good read! Keep up the good work, mate _
| morgana721 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Fantastic! You are a gifted writer. I hope you continue with Lucian and Sonja because you added more depth to their characters and a great take in how they fell in love. Again fantastic. Love your story on my favorite characters. Hope you continue soon.
| Aelweyn chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
I like this story so much! Please, update it!
| nicodemusfleur chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
I'm loving it! I've always had a soft spot for Lucian/Sonja (especially after seeing Rise of the Lycans), but there aren't very many really good stories involving the two of them, and many good ones have sadly been abandoned. But now I have this one :D
I'm really liking your take on how Lucian and Sonja's relationship evolves from Lucian basically being her slave, to them being in love. Obviously, in the movies we see where they end up, but as you've shown it couldn't have been easy getting there. I really hope as the story goes on you delve more into Lucian's psyche, because being a slave for his entire life must have left some mark (I'd imagine), and you definitely started on that path with his reaction to Sonja saying 'Good dog' to him.
I really (really) hope you continue with this story, because I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
| AnnaVanHelsing1887 chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
I can't find the words to describe how amazing this is. The characters were perfect,and I loved all of the detail. I'm really looking forward to more of Lucian and Sonja's story.