oh, wow. wasn't expecting that stuff with Alice! :] Can't wait for another update!

( what a relationship btw emmett and edward. hard working with family..

So wow Alice and Edward, not so sure how I feel about that. Does Jasper need to grow the fuck up hell yes but I am a canon couple girl at heart...So Emmett is being a douche, I suppose I would too if I got scolded not only by my big brother but my dad but seriously, he needs to grow the fuck up too.

I really like the dynamic of E being the go to person here but I am afraid of what will come in later chapters.

Jasper and Emmett have a lot of growing up to do, it'll be interesting to see how they develop!

okay, wow! I don't know why but, bleh (no offense or anything) but...c'mon alice? in love with edward? bleh LOL, it just sounds so...i mean i've ALWAYS seen them as the brother-sister type, NEVER the romantic type, so it's kinda grossing/freaking me out. kinda like the incest thing...sorry if i offended you though :

on the other note, poor jasper :( :( :(

my question is that whether this story is canon? especially: EDWARDXBELLA canon?

but once again, amazing chapter! you're a really talented writer!

can't wait for more, and I happen to like you writing in the 3rd person...

Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one:)

We like you, we really like you! How is it hard to believe that we would respond when you have given us such a wonderful start?

Each of the characters are so well written and simply draw us in. I recognize the characters that SM created but yet they have taken on their own personality as well. You have evoked string emotions from me, from wanting to hug and kiss to kick their asses. Each character jumps out at you and becomes important.

I am on the edge of my seat and can't wait to get each chapter that you send out. You always have those fics that you rush to read as soon as the email pops up in your inbox. Well congratulations yours has been added to my list of rush to reads!

Thanks for sharing with us,

bnjwl

Well yet again Edward saves one of his brothers from certain death, they would indeed be lost without him. So now Jasper & Emmett are feeling remorse for treating Edward so horribly, I wonder if it's foreshadowing that Jasper hopes his efforts to pay Edward back aren't too late, that maybe Edward has to choose between saving Emmett and Jasper and chooses Emmett because of his impending fatherhood? I also wonder since Alice was planning to leave Jasper if her wanting to be away from Jasper is also foreshadowing of Jasper being gone.

I was really surprised that Alice made a pass at Edward, claiming to be in love with him, I think it's more gratefulness than love.

when is bella coming into the story line?

Meh, I think third person is easier if you want to include multiple POV's on the same subject, in the same chapter. First doesn't allow that.

TBH, I'm kinda icked out that Alice kissed Edward on his jaw. I never saw/will see the two of them as anything more than brother and sister, whether or not they were related.

I get where Alice is coming from. She fell in love with Jasper and his carefree nature, but now she's matured and he hasn't, he isn't what she needs on that emotional level.

Edward really needs to take that time off before he seriously injures himself.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm really enjoying this story. I'm intrigued to see where you take it. Thank you for writing!

poor alley!

o well!

u cant seperate jaz and alley tho!

they are life yatta yatta yatta!

well mayb-ay u could, but the guy has to be hot...

Really in depth chapter, I like your Edward alot. Jasper really is getting it from every direction. Sounds like he might be ready to start growing some though. Not sure about Em. Poor Alice, that would be hard, to put yourself out there like that, of course, she had to know he would reject her, knowing how he is about his brothers. I am really getting pulled in here, and enjoying this one. Thanks for sharing with us, I look forward to reading more soon.

Wow that was wow. I never would've expected that. this is going to be a great story.

Man I never saw that coming with Alice regarding her feelings for Edward and Jasper. I can understand where she's coming from on the Jasper front, especially with how immature he does come across so far in this fic. I can't wait for the next chapter.