Don't be nervous, this is fantastic. Just the first chapter alone shows what a brilliant author you are. I've never read anything like this and I must admit Im nervous as hell about the impending doom, but totally waiting with baited breath. Truly wonderful.

Great beginning!

Really, I don't know why you get the jitters about posting. I find you to be a fabulous writer, one who is very talented with drawing a reader in and painting a picture of not only the surrounding, but of the characters.

I'm so excited to see where this story goes. Where ever it is, I'm sure it'll be quite the adventure getting there, one I am fully prepared to be entertained by.

On a side note, not including ABH, I think it is funny how your main characters (Edward/Bella) have been getting progressively older. BTS they were in High School, TOF in their mid-twenties, and now the late twenties. Just found that to be a silly observation.

Keep up the amazing work!

Ok jersey, I can deal with the HF as long as there is an HEA:)

Great writing,as usual. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I don't know why you are worried. I can't wait for more! You are an excellent writer keep it up!

I have been dying to read this since the sneak peek u sent. And i must say i love it. As i was reading the 1st chap i was becoming so pissed with emmett and jasper. Poor edward. Im so intriguied to find out what happens. And i must say this may be the 1st tragedy/drama i've read on twilight fanfic. Normally i read the humorous ones but this one is so intresting!

Can't wait for more! Plz post more soon.

It seems very interesting so far . Look forward to the next chapter.

I am loving this, and you should never be nervous about posting a story, just say you don't want flames, and that way, if they don't like it they will stop reading it, simple!

Can you read my new story? I want to see if it's ok, and nobody is reading it. It is very different from lots of things that I have read, and that I have written. It's called A Means to an End. It's about Rosalie mainly but it's also about her and Edward's relationship and her and Emmett's relationship, you'll see if you read it, and I would appreciate it if you would.

Thank you

Gina xx

Love it, love it, love it! I love firemen! I have a few friends who are and they are my favorite men in uniform! So having our favorite Cullen boys wearing that uniform makes me tingly all over! I love your writing. I can get so engrossed in it and just picture it all in my head! Can't wait for more!

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Finally someone who's writing about what it's really like to be a firefighter. You're very much right on. Most people don't understand how hard/stressfull it can be for a firefighter and their family.

I really like how you've changed the personalities of the characters too. With Edward we see a man who takes care of everyone and gets nothing in return. Then we have Emmette and Jasper who seem like the two most irresponsible fools on the planet.

Absolutely loved this chapter though,and I can't wait for the appearnce of Bella. Maybe she'll be just what Edward needs.

I can already tell that this is going to be absolutely amazing. Not that I would expect any less from you, but still, I am already hooked. I love the family dynamic you've set up where where Edward is the oldest. You've only given us a taste and I feel as though I have already connected with the characters. I can't wait to see how this all pans out. _

After reading everything else you have written, I have no doubt that this will be brilliant :} I'm looking forward to reading this :)

I have to admit that this is only the second fan fiction story that I've read to contain firefighters, and I must say just from the prologue alone, it grabbed my attention. Just the description of what it feels like when the alarm sounds was amazing. You really get a feeling of what they are going through.

In this chapter, you can see that Edward is at his wits end already with his brothers. Just with them being irresponsible is eating Edward alive. Jasper and Emmett really do need to start standing on their own feet, and stop relying on Edward and their parents for everything.

I must admit, I'm really not looking forward to the tragedy that is going to happen in this story, but I will read it. It just makes me very nervous when I don't know exactly what character is going to see his/her demise. I really think that is my main problem when reading a tragedy story. I've read one before where Bella was killed off, and I bawled my eyes out. It was so sad.

You have done an amazing job so far with this story, and I can see it gaining a lot of attention. I can't wait until the next update. I am officially hooked. Until then...

Jennifer

Oh my, I am so excited for your new story, but now I am scared of the majopr HF you are sng, that warning cannot be good!