Lady you are a pure literary genius. Preface was AH-Mazing!

I have to ask though cuz it kinda sounds like you may be having one of the main characters die. The parents, if they die, I don't really care that much cuz they're older and they're supposed to die. But are you having one of the main 6 die? I need to know, cuz I won't continue reading if they die. That's just how I roll.

Genius though!

Oh my, Emmett and Jasper really do need to grow up. Poor Edward is at his whits end. I cannot wait to see were this goes. I am an angst/heartfail H00r it kills me reading it but I love it.

You have no reason to be nervous as judging by the first two chapters this is going to be an amazing story! I love that your making it true to life as a lot of the fireman stories are glorified, which don't get me wrong, is all well and good and I do love the ones I've read. But it's great that your bringing awareness to how tough these guys have it.

Can't wait for more ;)

Love what I've read so far, and am looking forward to more. I love your work, I'm thrilled you posted a new story.

I already love the first chapter I can't wait till the next ones.

I have a feeling this story is going to own me.

Poor Edward my heart broke a little for him because he has to much on his shoulders.

I got really excited when I saw I had an alert on my email for this story. I cant wait to see where it goes and read the rest of it :)

I wanted to smack Jasper and Emmett for acting like little children when they were hosed and for all the crap they're putting on Edward's shoulder to deal with, and Carlisle for putting so much pressure on Edward's shoulders.

I also want to hug Edward. He does so much for his family and gets so little time to just be him.

Never mind. Heartfail.

I just fail in general.

sounds interesting are edward and bella going to meet xx

What a nice surprise D I thought it'd take a while for you to post a new fic.

I really like stories with firefighters and you definitely hold my attention with family drama and realism...I love those things combined :)

Thanks for posting and don't be afraid… Your writing is lovely...Can't wait to read more ;)

x x

HF ?

I'm so excited for this story. I asked you on Twitter to start posting on my birthday and you're a whole week and a day early! *Bows down at your feet*

Can't wait to see where this goes... Thank you

Love the premise but I am kinda scared with the 'tragedy' and Severe HF warning.

hm, interesting, i'm kinda nervous to find out how bella might play out in all of this. her death maybe? your already freaking me out women!

oh, just a side note, i usually hate third person, but i'll live with this one. ;P

Great start. I look forward to more:)