|Reviews for Fool Me Twice|
| ClancyJane chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
I really love this story so I would love to see it finished.
I truly hope you come back one day :)
| MaryMary123 chapter 16 . 11/19/2012
You are not the only writer to loose focus. You have a good story. Not earth shattering but good. Finish it. Never start something and just leave it. It is not how fast you are, or how smart you are it is that you commit to something and then see it through. FINISH THIS.. please
| MaryMary123 chapter 14 . 11/19/2012
Why did Carlisle do that to B? She has got to start talking. Alice needed to know, Edward need to know and Rose needs to know. This shit is causing whiplash..I wonder why I am reviewing you abandoned this story.
| MaryMary123 chapter 13 . 11/19/2012
Bella needs to move out. Living with Alice throws this in her face constantly. So why even go there.
| MaryMary123 chapter 9 . 11/19/2012
Well Ed is the best man I bet you. He is love with B but he treats her like shit. Well fine. Jasper is there for her. I think Paul is in love/lust with her. So fine..
| MaryMary123 chapter 8 . 11/19/2012
I might just kill Sue first then Emmett then leave. Why is Carlisle pleading for Edward? Edward been chasing women in his jurisdiction?
| MaryMary123 chapter 7 . 11/19/2012
Honestly, She needs to go back and move to Jersey. Anyone with the name Cullen is not invited except Rose. They are both nuts Alice & Edward. You do not live in the past. You do not hurt others for what someone else did to you. THAT IS DUMB
| MaryMary123 chapter 6 . 11/19/2012
I want you to know your story is well written. I don't like Edward but then you would understand that. Bella needs to move out of that apartment and give Jasper her address and Rose her phone # and no longer associate with anyone with the last name of Cullen until it is Rose and Emmett. GET SOME BALLS.
| twilightfanatic00 chapter 16 . 7/24/2012
i have enjoyed your writing. are you going to continue this story? i sure hope u do.
| Gryphon88 chapter 16 . 3/13/2012
After reading your story so far, I've come to the conclusion that all of your characters are in grave need of therapy. Bella is a passively neurotic alcoholic that invites all the bad things that happen to her, both Edward and Alice are spoilt brats and Carlisle is an ass.
Jasper is useless and Emmett...god only knows what he and Rose are. I'm exhausted after reading your story.
It's been interesting...thanks for writing.
| EnidBarb chapter 16 . 3/2/2012
I hope you do finish this. I just found it and I love it.
| SurpriseEnding chapter 16 . 6/28/2011
Where's our update?
| Charmed Vampire Girl chapter 16 . 6/5/2011
Just found this story. It is very entertaining. I hope that you update soon.
| ClancyJane chapter 16 . 5/22/2011
I have laughed and cried while reading this wonderful story : )
looking forward to more... does Riley have a 'addiction' like edward ?
personally i dont think thats edward's problem... he is just a narcissist who has been spoilt by daddy and not taught how to respect women, hopefully his time away can allow him to grow up and learn some damn manners...
If Bella moves on she will have nothing to feel guilty about and if Eddie's family cant see that then maybe they should ALL be in therapy...
oh and Carlisle should be taken out back to be drawn and quartered - what an arse !
| DutchGirl01 chapter 16 . 5/8/2011
Great story, keep up the good work!