Reviews for Untouchable
Caroleg chapter 31 . 8/11/2015
Great story.
Rose chapter 31 . 3/15/2014
OMG! I'm squealing! Such an amazing story. I love how Bella heals and that bastard gets what he deserve. I love how her friends stuck by her and gave her support. thank you so much for writing this story! :)
MatingInspires chapter 31 . 3/11/2014
Love HEA!
ForeverLobsters chapter 31 . 2/26/2014
Some tough things to read about but I like the way you handled them. So glad Bella found her new family and they stood by her every step of the way.
michigangal0223 chapter 31 . 10/8/2012
loved reading your e/b story
artri chapter 30 . 3/12/2012
A fitting, very sweet, very lovely ending. Great story.
artri chapter 29 . 3/12/2012
Nice twist...
artri chapter 20 . 3/11/2012
Wonder what shes up to...
artri chapter 18 . 3/11/2012
Perfect response and good for her to see. This is so good and getting better with every chapter.
artri chapter 16 . 3/10/2012
That was a sweet chapter...she still has to tell him.
artri chapter 14 . 3/10/2012
At least it is out to someone other then Carlise. The smoothness of your writing is much better as the story has gone on.
artri chapter 9 . 3/3/2012
Wouldn't I only love to, bullies are such a pain but the hurt they inflict takes years to recover from better to fight back early.
artri chapter 7 . 3/3/2012
This is a good Alice. You write the tension and terror so well I almost dread to find out what has happened.
finsartri chapter 6 . 3/1/2012
She needs help in the worst way...
finsartri chapter 5 . 3/1/2012
It had to how you write it in such a way that although it is serious it made me laugh.
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