|Reviews for Menage a Trois|
| ForrestersWitch chapter 7 . 9/28/2013
this is fucking good!
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/28/2013
please please please finish writing this story
| shorty1773 chapter 7 . 6/30/2013
This is a great story! Hopefully, you can continue it soon!
| ladyj0490 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
First off Bella is insane! I would be pissed off that my husband cheated on me and my Bestfriend betrayed me! So it's just ok with her that her man was fucking someone else behind her back? Yea ok. It would be different if they talked about it and they agreed to the whole thing but they didn't. How crazy
Great first chapter though.
| naughtynati chapter 6 . 3/7/2012
I'd love to know how this story ends.
| ladylibre chapter 7 . 3/6/2012
well, Well, WELL!
That was certainly hot, explicit, and dirty.
A good time seemed to be had by all.
But I'm seriously wondering how this is all going to play out. Can Jasper really become the third partner in their marriage? Is he going to be okay with knowing that Bella only loves Edward? And as far as Edward goes, does he understand the depth of his feelings for Jasper? It seems like it's more than sex there. Not to mention, his secret...whatever that is.
The sex was wild and very well described. You've got me seriously hot and bothered and wishing that my husband was home, LOLOL!
But I honestly think that the questions about what will become of the three of them outside the bedroom are even more compelling.
It's been many moons since you updated. First of all, I hope all is well in your world. And second, I hope you plan to finish this story and take these three out on dry land to see what will happen in the light of day.
Be well and update soon :)
| ulyses birdwing chapter 7 . 2/26/2012
This is among the best erotic fiction I've ever read! I love the quality of your writing, how polished and smooth your descriptions are, and your descriptions of very realistic emotions and the interplay between the main characters. I'm very impressed, you are inspirational and I'm looking forward to read more of your work.
| sleepallday chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Love this story! Are you done with it?:( Pleeease continue..
| Chiromom chapter 7 . 1/27/2012
I just found this story today and I love it. I didn't even realize until I got to this chapter that it had not been updated in several months, but by this point I couldn't stop reading. I really hope you haven't decided to not finish this story, I am aching to read more of it.
Thanks for sharing, and I hope to see an update soon.
| Nads chapter 7 . 1/27/2012
Awesome story! Absolutely loved it! But... more? Neeeeeeed more! How about some more? *jumps up and down*
Please email me when there's more!
| emmzac chapter 2 . 11/17/2011
And the hot stuff didn't stop at the end of the first chapter as chapter two was even hotter than the first. What will chapter three be like I'm not sure if you could get any hotter than that...
| emmzac chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
Wow, no slow start to this little hot piece. NO, straight into it and I have to say this was one very hot lemon of chapter.
| wendy1969 chapter 7 . 9/19/2011
I dont remember reviewing, so bloody sorry.
Umm, just anna say that it is a great story. I am not and E/B follower. but when it has J in there with Bthen i will read it.
Your story is really good.
I reckon Edward should just say straight up while both are in the room with him. what hefeells for both of them. then Jasper then Bella. Jasper shouldf also admit why he was always like he was with her and then just admit he has loved her for years. he is now attracted to them both as they are to them all as well.
But alas... that is just an opinion:)
| wendy1969 chapter 2 . 9/19/2011
this is so beautiful in this chapter.
| wendy1969 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
maybe she should have just admitted it in the first plce to edward. then they both could have gotten with Jasper and WHAM!