Reviews for God of Illusion, Host of the Devil's Arm |
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![]() ![]() ![]() More please |
![]() ![]() Man natsuki is a jerk |
![]() ![]() Hello |
![]() ![]() Love ur story’s I know I’m late but still |
![]() ![]() pls bro mak a new chapeter this has so much potete |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its been 10 years, its time to update this or let someone adopt it my guy |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great keep the chapters comings |
![]() ![]() 10/10 made me cry i had to stop reading it to make sure that i would cry even more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue with the story, it's very good, please don't give up, a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a big fan of this type of story and the truth is that they have no comparison. |
![]() ![]() Good job with this story can't wait till you make the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good then i noticed the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() u 'explained' ...i see no solid reason there for the drawing and the jutsu. a tip that u probably don't care about but...revealing future plot is just uncool, for readers who "predict" the plot, it's just so much info that dampens the joy of reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sure the kid getting some credit for his work wouldn't kill the whole 'neglect' vibe. Is it that hard to find other more legit reasons that can be easily and logically stolen? The sketches? please signatures exist for a reason(don't tell me it can also be copied cause the whole point of signatures is that they're the symbol everyone acknowledged as yours. The genjutsu? a repeat on any Konoha ninja even without their consent. #stress anyway the key point is that the thief can't do what u can doif this Naruto is so smart i don't see why he hasn't noticed that yet (besides plot reasons ofc) |
![]() ![]() Is chapter 9 a thing or are you done with this series |
![]() ![]() ![]() Note to self: If ever got hypothermia, just read this story. Blood pressure raise guaranteed. |