Reviews for God of Illusion, Host of the Devil's Arm
Epis chapter 3 . 3/5
chapter 3 got me, and then I learned what lube of story this would be. So unique.
Leroy chapter 3 . 2/24
Wow you made his sister a total cunt. I'm reading in hopes she gets bashed lol
BartWLewis chapter 6 . 2/1
Loving it. Can't wait for more.
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 1/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
GhettoZorceress chapter 8 . 12/22/2016
I liked the story, it was interesting. But I was hoping that Naruto would takes some names and kick some A5S.
wolf chapter 8 . 11/23/2016
man i don't know your plan for sora but it does seem verry promising. also just thought of something what would orochimaru do if he ever learns of that arms power? i mean his goal is to master every jutsu, kekkei genkai included, i can just see him wanting that arm either to add directly to himself (if impacent) or to do as naruto fears and dissect it learn how to works to replicate it in himself and all future bodies, ideally though out the body and not just in one limb
wolf chapter 7 . 11/22/2016
ok man hands down your biju are better than canon especially kyubi. the verry idea of his emotion control is totally boss and i can see it being a much better power for him than what canon did, it also even ties in with real kitsune legend, even if it is loosely, by thinking of it like the most powerful control type genjutsu with it's only realistic rival being the Kotoamatsukami, which can only be use once a decade by someone who has the mongekyo sharingan. this makes me want to see naruto's reaction when he sees his sister after she learns to use it and naruto learns to somehow get his arm to use the kekkei genkai he wants it to do especially the kurama clan's, which in my eyes is the ultimate attack type genjutsu, and maybe see naruto's anger at his "spoiled" sister for being given powerful genjutsu when she had no interest wile he had to work to get his and with it a battle of the two main groups of genjutsu at their most extreme. ultimate control of the heart vs ultimate control of the brain
wolf chapter 6 . 11/22/2016
sorry just read your explanation of your devils arm and that scene with the dna solution samples, and i have to ask do you even know the difference between hiden jutsu and kekkei genkai. most of those clans special skills are hiden jutsu that means they are not inherited though genes they are taught, meaning a civilian born from kiri can learn the akamichi's explanation jutsu and that dna injection c#$ will not give a person the jutsu, they are just only taught to family members so the clan can stay important with minimal effort, wile kekkei genkai is genetically passed down and so the dna injections can actually give someone something like the sharingan and the only clans with kekkei genkai in konoha are the uchiha, seju, hyuga and kurama clans and in two of those clans the kekkei genkai are really rare. but i will be verry cool to see naruto's reaction to him using the real genjutsu of the kurama clan given his love of genjutsu. still a good story just hit a nerve with the calling hiden jutsu kekkei genkai
AllergicToLobotomy chapter 8 . 11/22/2016
I hate you.
KnightBloom chapter 7 . 11/8/2016
Wow great ideas
KnightBloom chapter 6 . 11/8/2016
Amazing, very amazing
KnightBloom chapter 5 . 11/8/2016
Nice...
KnightBloom chapter 4 . 11/8/2016
Damn...
lolitagirl.2015b chapter 8 . 10/21/2016
Will Naruto later get the kyubis chakra? Please update soon.
lolitagirl.2015b chapter 3 . 10/21/2016
Will he join Iwagagure or Kumogagagure? Will he be able to use his chakra chains?
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